[Revision] Love Comedy Teen
Bodo Amat

now Rachel's school has a long day off because they've completed a semester break. And Rachel's best friend didn't cheat on her anymore either.

As usual because of the holiday so Rachel has not woken up even though it is now 07.12 WIB. His mother tried to wake him but Rachel still did not want to wake up.

*tttrrrr.r...tttttrrrrr*

a shadow of the sound from his HP

"hm...... what the hell? early in the morning has disturbed people again to sleep" with a heavy voice typical of new people wake up

see the hp screen

Because Rachel had just woken up, so she looked at her phone with a flicker until her eyes could see the phone clearly.

"Chel, will you come with us on the road? You must not be awake, right? do not ngebo Mulu, yuk come with us" he murmured while reading a chat from Farsya

"road? where are you going to try?" ask her own

"uh, but ntar first" sat at the end of his bed

"but really, the cave of Mulu's time? mending cave holiday come with me" take the hp

"See, the cave's coming. The cave is ready first. We meet at a regular cafe" he type and send it to no Farsya

"already, now the cave bath trus ready"

Skip finished the shower

"so soon....., which shirt cake is it?"

open her closet

rachel Style

Then Rachel went downstairs to say goodbye to her parents.

"mah, I went hangout with Farsya"

"yes I can but must eat first, later you mag her relapse you know"

"yes" pulled up the dining chair and sat down

"oh yes Chel, mamah want to go out of town for a while huh"

"why mah?" while putting chocolate jam into his bread

"you got a little business"

"oh...papah come?" eat the bread

"the day after tomorrow also want to go abroad, he said to take care of companies in Singapore"

"didn't you, you didn't eat?"

"you ate first with the papah earlier" Rachel simply nodded

"Chel, you can invite your friends to do nginep here. But inget if messy in finishin if it's finished"

"later Rachel thought again"

"loh why?"

"yes Rachel hesitated, if Rachel brings them here who have them bring a girlfriend again" Rachel lied

"do you have any girlfriends?" she looked at Rachel uncertainly

"yes...yes..

"the time?" teasing Rachel

"you know, yes I've left first huh mah" stood up and kissed his mama's hand

"well, be careful, baby" stroked Rachel's hair

"yes, bye....."

"that's dear"

On the other side

"Well, where are we going?"

"we'll wait for Rachel, Jen" Tasya suggested

"does Rachel really want to hangout with us?"

"yes, why?"

"yes gpp anyway, only later in the long run.kan Rachel likes to ngebo Mulu if the holiday gini" said Faiza while taking pictures

"he told me to go to the cave, he said on the road"

"eh guys, look at that instead of Adi?" jennie said as she narrowed her eyes to make it clearer

"oh yeah, that's Adi"

"but Bag, why is he alone anyway? where's temen?"

"yes where the cave knows ogeb"

While others fuss about Adi, Faiza is even fun to read her novel book

"eh Za, you're a real habit"

"uh uh? what are Tasya's habits?"

"yes Lo everywhere bring books continue nyuekin us, you can't ya if the book just stay first?"

"yes the bosen cave wants to be a cave read a book"

"nice basics" led by Jennie

"eh uh, look" said Farsya surprised

"what the fuck?"

"that's it (pointing to Adi's direction) it's not Rachel?" his best friend also saw

"yeah yes, why did their tumben not debate? even rich people do not know" Faiza wondered

"not quite right"

"what's wrong?"

"yes it's not right, usually they immediately debate when there is nothing and now they see each other out of face, that's not right Jennie ogeb" explained Tasya

"the cave feeling of daritadi is called ogeb mulu"

inner mode on

shit, why is he here? make the mood of the cave so angry aja* inner Adi

according to the agreement of the cave can not meet let alone talk and debate the same child, so the cave must be emotional.patient Rachel patient* inner Rachel

inner mode off

"guess they're talking it through the mind"

"Do you know where she is from?" Farsya glanced at Faiza

"Lo see when they waste their face, they richly contemplate for a moment that suddenly they are rich in emotion. Gua suspects them the debate is going through the mind" focus on seeing Rachel and Adi

"the time of the day?"

"but there's also a lot of sense guys, they're diem but they're both angry"

"faiza believes in caves"

"do you still believe that? maybe they have their own problems? maybe it is"

"Tash..... Tasya, you don't believe it? obviously if they had the problem immediately overflowed, but now it is not. Maybe if they had that rich power?"

"bodo Amat"

"ih..basic"

Rachel approached her best friend with a run. Her best friend is still unconscious because she is so serious about seeing the strange Rachel and Adi.

"hi guys"

no response, they remain unclear. Rachel was confused and immediately took a chair and sat down. Because there was still no response and they were still arguing, Rachel finally hit the table to surprise her best friend.

brackk.....

"chicken uh chicken" Jennie

"eh I'm pretty rich blackpink" said Farsya

"haha"

tasya, Faiza and Rachel laugh together

"Lo talk to Him? Jen?" ask Rachel

"the new cave knows if you guys talk, know that we often-often ngaggetin them"

"yes, Za, really. We will often worry about them

toss.......

Faiza and Tasya

"ahs....Lo the hell Chel, the cave so shocked right?"

"yes you know, anyways we're just surprised not talkative, isn't Jen?" nudging Jennie's arm

"yeah, we're not talking about just reflexes"

"ah maca cih?" tasya Goda

"do not believe in us anymore"

"don't make a fuss" Rachel's injury

"oh yeah Chel, you have Adi's problem?"

"no, why Za?"

"gua just feels weird, usually both of you debate when you meet Trus-"

"iya tuh and now Lo diem-dieman same Adi" Farsya cut

"Nyamber and Lo Tasya?"

"cave is just kepo"

"yes it is wrong if the cave does not debate with him? not good?"

"yes good, just really you don't want to debate again with Adi?"

"no ah, males tau Jen"

"doesn't you have a deal with him?" suspicious Faiza

"covenant?" tasya

"well, who knows, you have made an agreement with Adi"

they can not know, if they know later the cave agreement with Adi can fail, the agreement they should not know. The cave must be relaxed, if not later the cave can deal again ama tu child and the cave already does not want to deal with him anymore

"hahaha how could the cave make a deal, there's no point either"

"wouldn't you just be the same as him so you don't have emotions anymore on his deck?"

"cie cie cieeeeee.." ledek.

"eh uh, where maybe the cave wants to be the same as him. ogah bener"

"cie.... who again crave, later the cave asked for his PJ ok?"

damn, the cave even thought to be the same as him. Intention to hangout even so gini, mending cave in the house just now

"anyway the cave is not the same as him, it's up to you to believe what is not important is the truth. If you still don't believe the cave mah BODO AMAT"

"sa ae or mba, no emotions"

"Lo on the one that makes the cave of emotions"

"we went to the mall"

Finally they all went to the mall until the afternoon and evening they went to the night market. Today, they are meant to have fun together.

"guys we ride the yuk reanglala"

"yes tuh, yuk guys we ride the bianglala. The cave hasn't played that long"

"so great Lebay Lo Chel until we see the bianglala"

"yes, let's go up"

"yes yuk bag, guys, kasian later Rachel cry" led Jennie

"yes, yuk"

"gasken bro!!" shouted Farsya

Inside the ring

sitting position

Rachel and Jennie

Farsya/Tasya

Faiza

Place Faiza, Farsya and Tasya

"wah...a very good thing from the top of the view"

"iya Za, good but there's less"

"what's the Bag?"

"pair"

"so much melow Lo Tasya" ledek Farsya

"haha.....Lo.... hahaha..... tumben really think about girlfriend?"

"Lo mah gitu Za, the cave again sad even mocked"

"yes, we're weird to squirm Lo gini"

"typically you don't like it the most"

"yes the cave feels it's time for the cave to start bucin"

"there's a Lo Bag"

At Rachel and Jennie's

"Jen, you got a girlfriend?"

"none, broke up"

"was? why?"

"he cheated on another girl, the cave did not believe him anymore as he became a cave break only"

"is it good to be dating?"

"depending on who Lo is dating, if Lo's boyfriend is good, loyal, romantic, and understanding must be good. But if you choose the wrong girlfriend rich cave, Lo will not feel good to have a girlfriend"

"oh that" turned his face away

"why? tumben really ask you about dating?"

"no papa"

"Lo likes people again? who's? try stories"

"no, Jen, the cave doesn't like people anymore"

"what is trus?"

"just want to know"

"is that time? a normally cheerful Rachel now becomes quiet and suddenly asks about dating again. Cave suspicious"

"suspect why?" still didn't see Jennie

"Lo likes Adi? let's ngaku....."

"the cave is very similar to the cave"

"yes, Lo lately again deket same him"

"how debit? the one with the storm cave was as heartless as her" now looked at Jennie with her lazy gaze

"starting a storm can be love, Chel"

"gua doesn't believe that"

"gua believe"

"no exclamation ah gini continue to talk, already know the cave bad mood eh even rich story that, added bad mood cave"

"very Lo Sensi today? again, yes?"

"no"

"continue?"

"numb"

"haha"

"why laugh?"

"so daritadi Lo diem because of sleepiness?"

"yes, manganese napa?"

"no papa just doesn't do it"

After they finished playing in the mallem market

"guys cave go home first yes" said Farsya holding Tasya

"bye Yes, Bag"

"oh yes, the cave has been awaited the same nyokap at home. Cave first yes, bye" Faiza said

"Who's coming home with Chel?"

"the same taxi"

"want anterine cave?"

"no, don't thank me, anyways this is already malem later Lo return kemaleman again if nganter cave first"

"gpp times, sans rich as anyone"

"no papa can go home alone"

"really?"

"yes really"

"yes cave back first yes, be careful Lo go home"

"Lo too, be careful"

"yes, bye my dear Rachel" drugs

"bye"drugs

"huh.gua nyari taxi deh"

Rachel walked out of the night market

"where are ya?" street-viewing

After almost 15 minutes Rachel waited but still no taxi passed

"where the hell? how long? how will you wait? it could be that the cave was lectured again" upset his leg

Now the clock has shown at 20:30 WIB but one taxi has not passed, and Rachel was tired of waiting.

"hi's beautiful, how is it here alone?" a group of men came to Rachel

"what do you want?!" afraid of Rachel

"eits... don't be ferociously beautiful dong" poked Rachel's chin and then brushed by Rachel.

"don't hold me!!"

one of them pretended to be afraid

"rather than waiting for a taxi, what if we are the ones who make you beautiful?"

"no, the cave won't!!"

after shouting Rachel took a few steps back, a group of men came forward to approach Rachel.

"don't come any closer!!"

"why? we just want to play with you pretty"

"please!!!! help!!!"

"don't yell, no one will help you"

One of them approached Rachel and wanted to hold Rachel by the hand, but suddenly someone held her back.

"wrong Lo?!" said one of the men who teased Rachel

"don't hold him"

"who's Lo?!"

"Lo don't need to know who the cave is, the important thing is you all pull it out, don't disturb him"

"Lo has no right to chat us, mending Lo go than Lo bonyok with us"

"okay, who's afraid?"

"nantangin ni son" one of the thugs gave the code to the other and they were planning to fight

bruc....

tang.....

ahhh....

bruc......

"look out for Lo" they left

The person who helped Rachel turned to look at the frightened Rachel on the side of the road. The man approached

"Chel, everything is safe. Don't be afraid anymore"

"gu...gu ta"

"no papa, all those people have gone"

"but the cave is still afraid" he said lowered his head

"no papa, there's a cave anyway" the man looked down at Rachel's height

"thank you Di, you've helped the cave" although Rachel said it softly but she could still hear it

"yes together"

the one who saved Rachel was Adi. Yes, Adi hated Rachel all this time. Although their agreement says that they should not meet, whether intentionally or not. But Adi still has a conscience, where might he just shut up to see Rachel being teased like that? Rachel looked scared earlier.

Suddenly Rachel's body limp her head dizzy, her vision began to blur

"Chel, you don't papa?"

"no, the cave is not papa" held his head

"Lo sure you're not papa?"

"yes, the cave is not papa"

brackish......

"uh uh, Chel?"

Rachel faints and Adi catches her

"Chel, wake up Chel" patted Rachel's cheek

"how is this? the grottoes are just a few times?"

when Adi was planning to hold Rachel, Rachel suddenly began to realize

"hm...."

"The chel? finally Lo realized too"

"the cave is dizzy" complained Rachel holding her head

"yes, the cave will carry Lo"

Adi takes off her jacket and ties it to Rachel's waist, as Rachel wears a short skirt. Adi also carried Rachel ala Bridal Style into his car.

After putting Rachel next to the driver's seat, Adi circled around the car and got into the car.

thank you, if there is no Lo maybe u- cave" said Rachel cut by Adi

"already, don't talk macem. Mending now cave anter Lo home yes" glanced at Rachel at a glance then turned on the engine of the car

"ntar first, Lo's wound must be treated first. Let's not get infected" holding Adi's injured right eye temple

"no, this is ordinary. The cave is not papa, you calm down" smiled

"no papa how? lo bruised face gini still say no papa? no need to be strong, the cave knows it must be sick. Here the cave of medicine" took Betadine and cotton from inside his sling bag

"Lo bring some medicine?"

"yes, caves everywhere must bring medicine, even if only Betadine is the same cotton doang"

"oh that"

"here sit, let's taste the cave"

Adi faced Rachel and looked at Rachel's face

"slow Chel"

"yes" Rachel begins to treat Adi's wounds

"ah ah... slowly dong Chel" ringis Adi in pain.

"it's slow"

"it's even slower"

"yes"

Skip Rachel finished treating Adi

"thank you, Chel has done the cave"

"yes together" put the medicine in her bag again

"gua also wanted to say thank you earlier Lo had nolongin cave from the thugs"

"yes, sans aja"

suddenly the atmosphere became quiet and awkward.

"we're going home now? it's malem too, Lo anterin cave"

"yes, the cave is also afraid of nyokap nyariin"

Skips

"thank you, Di, would you like to stop by first?"

"no, no need next time, it's a shame"

"yes, the cave first" came out of Adi's car

Adi still sees Rachel coming into the house.

"it turns out Rachel wasn't as bad as I thought she was" then smiled and ran her car

Inside the house

"mah, I'm home?"

"honey....where are you going? I just got home at this hour" he worried

"sorry mah, I played it too excited so forget the time" smiled clumsily

mending cave does not need a story that is actually the same mamah, later there is mamah more worried again. Sorry I didn't mean to lie to you

"yeah you've taken a shower gih, it's a break.you must be tired of playing all day"

"yes, if I go upstairs first, then mah"

"yes"

Inside the room

"worst experience ever cave alamin" put his body to sleep

"gua is so tired......"

"mending cave bath, already smell this body play from the morning"

Next day

"hi guys, the beautiful Rachel is coming back!!!"

he screamed when he entered his class

"jeez Rachel, can't you scream that?" jennie Protest

"yes, it can rupture the eardrum of the cave" continued Tasya

"lebay very Lo on, yes it's okay to maap"

"oh yeah, which Faiza?"

"Lo nyari that nerd Chel?" ask Tasya

"yes, where is he?"

"uh" showed it with a chin

"oh...again read the novel.." murmured Rachel.

"indeed the habit of the child, read Mulu. not bored what?" wonder Jennie

"let's just, instead of making trouble reading novels, YES NOT ZA?"

"YOI" Faiza replied from the corner of the classroom

"can't you scream? rich place far away, only 2 meters yell"

"he's the bag, oh yeah one more"

"what?" jennie replied lazily

"that's the answer?"

"what's wrong?" kepo Tasya

"Farsya where?"

"he's practicing basketball with his team on the court"

"do you want another basketball game?"

"yes, he said that. Farsya is the captain so he knows the match schedule" explained Tasya

"doesn't the cave know?"

"what's in it he's telling you about Lo?" ledek Jennie

"yes at least gua tau, let the cave not nyariin"

"we were just told"

"how will we follow Farsya's practice when we rest?" rachel's Proposition

"maybe, the cave also wants to see boys playing basketball too"

"Lo mah Jen, if the problem is a direct guy"

"let's say, the rich cave likes Lo is also not rich that?"

"no, the cave is not rich"

"who's Leo with whom?"

"no, not the cave"

"alah.... he said Leo handsome, sweet, pinter playing basketball who said?"

"gua just talks what it is, not bucin"

"same as a time"

"different"

"SST.......DIEM CAVE AGAIN FOCUS ON READING THE BOOK NIH" cried Faiza

"eh buset, is he loud?"

"Lo can't be called Jen? if not cave timpuk Lo use a cave bag" he threatened while holding his school bag

"patience bro.." said Rachel.

"beyond Chel, the cave wants to nimpuk tuh two slurs"

"was? the cave does not follow" said Tasya

"Lo was noisy too!!"

"already Za, patiently mending Lo inhale....huh....exhaust.......hah.........breath......uh............waste.......hah.." said Rachel, as she committed it to Faiza.

"how's Za? mengingan?"

"lumayan, thanks Chel"

"same-same"

Skip break

"Chel, guys, let's say he wants to see Farsya"

take Jennie

"yuk Jen"

"ntar first, wait for the cave!! ish...masa cave left" cried Faiza chasing her friend who had come out first.

"eat him don't focus so much on reading his book" embrace Faiza

"that's a really good story"

"yes on the field" Rachel said

But when Rachel walked first, suddenly someone hit her. It was almost Rachel falling, it was a good thing that the guy caught Rachel.

"aaaa.." cried Rachel as she was about to fall.

"eh uh.." the man caught him.

For a moment Rachel and that person stared at each other

"Za, Bag, that's Adi right? their tumbens get along" Jennie said

"they may be reflexive"

"liat deh, they are so sweet...rich in such novels" lebai Faiza.

Her best friend just rolled her eyes lazily, in front of them Rachel and Adi were still in the same position, staring at each other and Adi still held Rachel to avoid falling.

Inner mode on

*diliat-liat Rachel beautiful too if again not nyebelin gini, eits. Don't baper on, focus-focus

What is gini deg-degan cave? but anyway Adi cave is handsome, still according to the cave he nyebelin*

Inner mode off

Finally they realized and Adi let go of Rachel, not awkward now it was even a debate

"get out of the cave" said Rachel

Adi also releases Rachel

"not that thank you even fiercely"

"yes, thank you"

"don't talk about it"

"yes already.ka..... A....di.." she said cute to Adi.

Adi did not answer just directly leaving Rachel and her best friend without speaking

"base of a freak" Rachel muttered and stomped her feet

Faiza, Jennie and Tasya approach Rachel

"cie. who was hugged by Adi" nudged Rachel's arm.

"what the hell, it's just on the baper"

"ah... said it was rich but in the middle of his heart was already deg-degan tuh earlier" ledek Tasya

"let alone Adi is handsome, is not it?"

"Lo mah Jen, he thought the handsome guy kept on" led Tasya

"let's love the cave, Lo sirik ae"

"where is there a sirik cave? no tuh"

"already, mending us to the field he said to watch Farsya training. Hunt's coming in"

"right he said Faiza, yes yuk Za

rather than us being horrified by them a mute storm mending we stay alone" in collaboration with Faiza

"yeah yuk Chel, the cave is also males" Rachel and Faiza walked first

"uh, the cave is left?"

"Lo the hell Bag, this is all because of the cave lo so left, right?"

"Lo thinks the cave wants to be left? the cave is also ogah times, everywhere also Lo is wrong Lo lebay"

"well, it's been a lazy debate ama Lo, bye!!" shake his hair and leave

"subhanallah, hair down" protested Tasya

"that's weird Jennie" Tasya muttered and followed his friends

On the field

"Farsa!!! spirit!!!" yell Jennie

Farsya who was standing in the middle of the field turned to his friends, answered with a smile and waved his hand

"Farsya Pinter really well playing basketball?"

"yes, it's Za, he's a basketball captain that's better than the others"

"gua is proud to have a rich friend of Farsya"

"yes, the cave is also proud and the cave is also fun to be friends with you" Rachel embraced her 3 best friends

"Lo can be Chel"

"gua also has a rich friend Lo Chel, already consider Lo the sister of Chel cave" said Tasya

"thank you guys"

While they were still hugging, suddenly there was a basketball that almost hit Faiza if not parried Rachel

"whose ball is this?!!"

"cave ball, here balikin"

"oh....Lo again, why the hell is Lo always everywhere? Can you play basketball?"

"clearly the cave can be, the cave is a basketball captain. Got that brain on dipake"

"continue why Lo's ball almost hit the cave buddy?"

"it's just an accident, you should know"

The one who was arguing with Rachel was Adi, yes Adi who was the captain of the basketball.

"here, the cave wants to practice again" snatched the basketball from Rachel's hand and left