ATIQA

ATIQA
Chapter 99: With You (Ending)


Atiqah with chest. It's better it's like this. Let Aziel grow up and find his own identity rather than having to feel confusion with his mother or father. And as bad as anything, Ardi is still his father.


Atiqah returned to Jogja after a week of divorce. Aziel has also returned to Canada. And Ardi is back at work.


Ardi's days are so boring. He just spends it working and working. His new habit, to nightclubs and drunkenness. The apartment full of memories of himself and Atiqah first, filled his mind as he was drunk.


Drunk Ardi hugged the bolster, smelling the bolster like he was fondling the Atiqah. Many times he fulfilled his desire by fantasizing with Atiqah.


"I'm totally crazy! I love you so much! I'm sorry! return darling. Atiqaaahhh .." cried Ardi as he was drunk at the nightclub alone.


Ardi's routine repeats itself like that, until finally someone in the past who took a grudge against him came with two sturdy people.


"He's already stoned. Bring it!" tell that man to his man. Ardi was put in a silver mini bus.


"At last we meet again -- patting Ardi-cheek-you are not much different from me. Even more jerk!" as the man said, pulled Ardi's collar and threw him again on the floor of the car.


"Where are you going to the boss?" ask the man sitting next to the wheel.


"We throw it to the edge of the toll" he replied.


Ardi was dumped on the edge of the toll after getting puncture wounds five times in his stomach. The news of Ardi's disappearance also reached the media. Until finally Ardi was found in the Cikampek toll road.


Luckily Ardi could still be saved, despite his critical circumstances. Ardi lost a lot of blood and his abdominal organs were damaged.


Atiqah rushed to Jakarta after hearing news of Ardi's stabbing. Ardi said his name.


Atiqah met her former in-laws in hospital. Anne apologized for all her mistakes. Same with Sigit.


"I'm sorry," only the words came out of Atiqah's lips. Then the doctor came out and asked Atiqah to come in.


Atiqah wears special green clothes. He approached Ardi. Atiqah cried to see the condition of her ex-husband.


"Ardi, it's me" Atiqah said softly in Ardi's ear.


Ardi opened his eyes slowly, the nurse helped open the oxygen mask.


"A ti qah, sa yang," said Ardi terbata.


Atiqah nodded, "Yes, it's me. I'm here" replied Atiqah, holding Ardi's hand.


"A ku min ta ma af" he said again.


Atiqah cried, nodded her head again. "Yes yes, I'm sorry. You must be strong, you must be healed. There's Ziel, our son. Aziel Danurdara," said Atiqah. Give encouragement.


"A I can love ta imu" said Ardi, tears dripping down. Atiqah smothers her mouth withholding cries. Then wipe away Ardi's tears.


"Yes, I know" replied Atiqah.


"Ja ga yourself, ju ga son ki ta," Ardi's voice grew soft.


"I don't want to! We should always be there for Ziel. You must heal," refused Atiqah.


"Bu at a pa a ku hi dup, you don't sa ma ka mu" replied Ardi. He's already desperate. His guilt and regret were only felt after Atiqah was completely released.


"There's Aziel. At least fight for Aziel. Aziel loves you," said Atiqah. Ardi shook his head.


The nurse asked Atiqah to leave the room. Time is given just a little.


The sound of a heart-detecting machine suddenly rang after Atiqah released her hand. Ardi returned critical and right then, Ardi left. Leave all the sweet and bitter memories. Atiqah decays, sits limp on the floor.


"You don't want to fight for our son. Kasian Ziel," Atiqah sobbed.


*****


Ardi's departure did solve all the problems Atiqah had experienced. But he also once loved Ardi, the man who gave him a handsome and clever son. Many sweet memories among the bitter memories he went through with Ardi.


But anyway, life goes on. Atiqah returns to her routine of volunteering. This time Atiqah went to South Korea. Atiqah became a medical aid, especially children in a hospital on the outskirts of Seoul.


And there, Atiqah met someone. An Indonesian teacher. The man was teaching at a local International University.


The accidental meeting happened when Atiqah went shopping to an Asia Mart right in front of the University. Atiqah is looking for snacks and some foodstuffs from Indonesia. A coincidence, the owner of the Asian Mart indigenous people who pitted fate to the Ginseng Country.


"What are you looking for?" ask the owner of the mini-market.


"Combustion pecel there is no bang? I want to make some vegetable pecels. It feels really good" said Atiqah.


"It just so happens to be over, but inside I have. You want? free for you," he said, directly into the room where the owner lived in it as well.


The man came out carrying pecel seasoning in a plastic container. "Here, take it,".


"Well, thank you so much bang. I became seneng," said Atiqah grimacing. Then he went to the cashier with the owner of the mini market.


Finished shopping, Atiqah pushed the door. "Ehem ... has become a doctor, do not know me anymore," chirped someone from a row of chairs terrace mini market. Atiqah turned his head, because the person spoke Indonesian and mentioned about the profession of doctor.


"Cook ..." Atiqah pointed at the man.


"What is it? sit down first. Chat, long time no see," he asked.


Atiqah confused, why can they meet in a place far from their own country.


"Here sit! even bengong aja. How you doing?" the man pulled the hand of Atiqah to sit next to him.


"Good .. good," replied Atiqah, he was still too shocked.


"Aren't you asking me?" tanyanya, pinched the cheek of Atiqah. Atiqah rubbed her cheek while continuing to stare at her interlocutor.


"You're rich in ghost squirming. So very," he added again. Atiqah.


That brief meeting didn't just end. They often spend time together on holidays. Atiqah recounted his past which was already known by the man. And instead, the man told me about his past.


"Will you marry me?" ask the man to Atiqah. It only took 6 months, and now he is trying to convince Atiqah to be his life partner.


Something romantic that ordinary South Koreans do. Applying for a lover in a place that is Namsan Tower, famous for the padlock of love.



Atiqah closed her lips. Is it right to accept it? is God this fast, you brought him suddenly to heal my wounds?. Batin Atiqah's.


Atiqah nodded and stuck out his finger to pin the diamond ring in the red velvet box. Just this time he felt in the real lamar.


"Now we put on a love padlock. Here, there's your name, I'm also our son Aziel," gave the love padlock.


"Thank you. Thank you for accepting my past, Mom. Also accept Aziel to be your son" said Atiqah. Then they put the padlock together, then threw away the key.


"May always be together, whatever the case. We face it together" said the man.


*****


Indonesia, June 15, 2030.




Aziel Danurdara (10th)



Sherly doesn't want to have children. Bener said ibuk. He can't live simply, accept what I earn. I broke up for divorce and accepted the offer to become an Indonesian teacher in Korea. The heart of Dawn at that time.


Atiqah and Fajar officially married after both of them had separated. Healing the pain in the past.


No matter how far you seek, what is destined for you, will surely return.


So far the story of Atiqah with Ardi and Dawn with Sherly.


Today, God has united the two in the sacred promise of a new marriage. Marriage is based on love, affection and also accept each other's shortcomings and advantages.


Aziel accepted anything, as long as her mother was happy.


"Bod must be good to mother. If there's anything with mom, face me" Ziel told Fajar. Dawn chuckled at Aziel's threat to her.


"OK ready!! I promise you," linking pinky fingers together. And laugh together.


"Mother not taught?" sela Atiqah's. Still wearing the wedding dress.


"Can't! it's between men. Mom gave me a sister. Only then," he proposed then tos with Dawn.


"Ish .. You're allies now. Okay, then I make a big sister for you," said Atiqah spread her fingers, numbering five. Aziel and Dawn stared at each other, stretching out their fingers. Ber wow's...


"So tonight, my son can't be bothered. Father and Mother will negotiate last night to give you a number - spread out his fingers again-five," said Fajar. Aziel soared in excitement.


"Yeay .. I'll get five sisters. Wow, five," Aziel was so happy.


Announce to everyone including Granny Asri, Om Robi, Granny Jum, Om Thunder, Aunt Ani, Aunt Rizka, Oma Anne, Opa Sigit, Mommy Daddy and Gea. Not to forget about Grandma and her new Grandpa, Grandma Siti and Grandpa Aji.


All gathered at the wedding of Atiqah and Dawn. Themed garden party.


*****


"False, Mas. Take me all the way here. It's my dream, Mas." Atiqah kissed Dawn's lips and hugged her.


"Together, dear," kissed the top of the head.


Honeymoon to epic, Cappadocia, Turkey.



"After this, we went straight to the hotel. I want some more. That was bentar doang," said Fajar still hugging Atiqah.


"Ihh .. addicted," Atiqah pinched Dawn's cheek, chuckling.


*****


A year later, a beautiful and tiny baby was born. Aliza Adhiwilaga.



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Thank you so much guys, support for ATIQAH 🙏🙏🙏 Hopefully the ending can satisfy you guys yes 😊


One mystery that is not othor revealed, who stabbed Ardi and threw him to the edge of the toll road. Play guess 😁 You must know who is vengeful Ardi.


Announcement Give Away general podium 1, 2 and 3 + 3 reader options will be announced one day after this ending yes (Group Chat). Maybe on Friday.


The author also wrote a new novel. Spin-off Kahiyang, one of the characters from My Young Husband Season 2.


Story lightly.


A mate for Kahiyang, with a background in his life who notes bene child outside of marriage. Enough to make his life difficult. Difficult to make friends, get along also get a soul mate. Although he is descended from Rozi Prasojo, a Mental and Behavioral Health Specialist and also the owner of one of the largest hospitals in North Jakarta.