Command System
Balqis's System - Struggle
Author:
I understand you don't know the direction of this story.. Since his revision of the novel. I was inspired to try to eliminate the main story and include various stories that this world experienced. From the past (history). Or the future. I hope this suits your performance
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the order returned after calling
"how?" Ask Rizky
"Sir. previously forgive my brother's stupid behavior (subject) And the car will soon pick us up" said the Order
"But!!!" Melisa said Crippling her cheeks
Rizky who heard that could only laugh seeing that brother fighting sister.
'how's eva doing?' rizky murmured who thought about the situation of her foster sister.
- Jakarta
Evas. At this time he had risen again and promised to return the favor of every favor of his adopted brother. Rizkiy.
"For my son" said the father. Milky
The man is now more actively smiling and with Kanoo
"morning Dad. again ngpain?" Ask Eva who just woke up..
"look at this. I just learned Kanoo. This gardener. He taught me how to care for plants to look beautiful" Dad said, Showing the small blue Yang flowers
"oh, did you wake up in the morning? What's up?" Ask Dad
"I'm back to work. Your son asked his brother to take care of the company's work in Indonesia and abroad" Eva said in a tone like a dizzy person
"what's the problem then?" Ask Dad
Eva breathes out and gives her phone
Bima's father saw Eva's cell phone and was surprised
"A--Whataa!!!? N-no way!" Shouted Bima's father who could not believe what he saw
"now you're shocked, aren't you? Remember dad saying don't yell at night? That's me screaming in shock because I saw this list of my sister's company" Eva said in her lazy tone
Bima's father returned Eva's mobile phone with a quiver
"W-w-is your sister actually from the richest family or something?" Ask Bima's curious father
"before dad came. Rizky once told me that her father & mother left her at the Orphanage and Rizky did not know where else they were both (parents)" Eva said
Bima's father lowered his face because he felt sad
"are you all right?" Eva asked who saw her real father just looked down
"Dad Remember when dad was a rizky's age. Dad doesn't have parents. Your grandfather & grandmother died from hostility between the heirs of Wealth from the father's brothers" said the father bima telling a story while sitting on the porch
"Father difficult to forget that time, they dropped each other including they tried to drop the father and eliminate your grandfather and grandmother so that one of them fell into his hands" Bima's father
"Hear That Rizky was abandoned by her biological father. Making Dad understand about Rizky's struggle to get all of that company" Bima's father said as he wiped his tears
Eva hugged her Bladder father
"Dad. Rizky has been struggling. he is now abroad demanding new knowledge and now he is calm to return to study and feel the age of adolescence so let's keep the treasure that Rizky has fought for" said Eva
Bima's father nodded in agreement. Bima does not want Rizky's struggle wasted
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...BYES...
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