I'm Back-!!
꧁house꧂
"I can only say sorry"
Slowly the Winnie's body disappeared like transparent
"Lu said it would be a cave!You said next week too.Why should it be now?"
"sorry"
"I have told you why I was sent in this era so I was considered unable to keep the system secret.Angel remembered the wall can hear never say anything"
Buppp......
The sound that made me fall
"Why am I crying?" - I wonder
"Who's this?are there glasses here?
(While back the glasses that fell on the floor)
"what is this memory?Argggh who is that woman?" - My words are in pain
"Tolo.
Brakes....
"Ughh a dazzling ray" - My greeting
When I woke up, I was at this mom's house.
Clamps (Voice opens doors)
"Do you want to be conscious?"
"Is that why I'm here?"
"You were delivered to the mother's house because the mother was on the phone with your lecturer, well nih eat first son"
"Let's go.iya thank you mom"
"The same is the same as to eat"
S K I P > > >
"Udah ma'am"
"I washed the bowl well mom"
Bruack....
"Awwww"
"Jeez, here's the mother who washed you still not healthy later
"No, Mom, I'll go home"
"You can't walk yet son"
"I can try to mom"
"Yauda will papah's mother you'll be yah?"
"Yes makasi ma'am"
"Still sick?Oh, how was your college?"
"Good all the mums"
"Amin buu"
S K I P > > >
(trying to stand up as hard as you can)
Bruack.....
"I certainly can" - I said in my heart
"Son angel wants to go home?here I help you yok"
(While we are)
S K I P > > >
"Well, lay first on the bed later the mother's door is keyed"
"Thank you mom always wanted to take care of me and be my guardian"
"Yes, son:) "
"Heart don't move much, son, you want to go home first"
"Yes ma'am"
Klekkk (Slowly closed door sounds)
"I don't imagine what, later if it's time I disappear?And I kept changing nothing and had to be a burden on my mom and dad again.Jeez just thinking about it makes me sick of wanting to cry"
"Oh yeah the flash"
Groping (Finding)
"Thankfully there is still"
(Huffft my breath is relieved)
"Ughhhh" - Tried to take a laptop on the table
"Hahh. huuu"
(Pull flash flash)
"What the hell is this?"
"Hahahaha God is on my side but what kind of game is this?Not enough to lose a friend?"
Are readers not curious?What makes Angel laugh? Why did Angel say that after accessing the flash? What is the content of the flashfisk accessed? A secret? Valuable files? The photo? Vidio's? The file? The makala? Chat history? Film history? History searches?Or what is it??!!! There are so many questions :v
Please keep the reader cool and calm
The author is fusing and wants to provoke emotions.
Ummmmm....
Why do snakes have no legs?
You see if the snake has legs later the danger can continue to be ribet shadowin later the name so the thousand foot snake is complicated want to find the size to continue to use one one.
If we provoke emotions, why not get the fish?
Well try to read the name also angling emotions means can emotions not different fish anymore if he said fishing fish :>
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