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'Commentary on who he is also happy like his doll also from whom, Hmp parents do not really know already have children 1 again he even believe in the words of the grandfather's grandfather old man got new karma know the taste of Hmp'In that person
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Mentari went straight into the house inside when she saw that Astri was cooking
Bi Astri looked at me and approached and asked
'Non from anywhere non-new look' said bi astri and he accidentally saw the doll held by the sun
'Where's the teddy bear from?'
"This? Cute teddy bear like a funny dance but dear Dance alone if this bear both look like kaka sister"Sad Mentari said
'Miss will still have an aunt do not be sad anymore, miss mendingan shower continue to eat down ya'
Mentari managed to divert the conversation and managed to get out of the situation, Of course Bi Astri also knew that the lady did not want to answer the question from him, the incident did not escape the sight of Someone
'*Hmp why don't you tell me the doll from whom it is difficult to peek to know if I don't know who the doll is from
'From whom yes the doll kept the lady also often out of the house back magrib I saw in the garden also the lady did not seem to love the lord nih'Bi Astri*
The three of them went in different directions Mentari towards her bedroom The man disappeared into the darkness and the aunt went to the bedroom to call her aunt
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There was a little boy sitting in the balcony of his garden
'Huh after the bath did ya'
The little boy fell asleep as a result of the night breeze accompanied by moonlight
On the other side
"Emm hello sir"
'What's up?'
"Master like this was the lady coming home to auntie tea heard the sound of the motorbike and aunt Jiga saw the lady carrying a doll"
'Continue? the time he bought it'
"It's not also that the lady's master recently often came home late because he was always in the park where the aunt saw the lady was not in the garden"
'She's not why isn't she? Hmm later I'll have someone to look after Dari'
At the same time
It was seen that a little boy was sitting in the balcony of the room waiting for someone to come to him
'Greetings miss'Say someone who came
"Where?"
That person also immediately told about the incident earlier, yes that person who had peeked and eavesdropped on Mentari
"Hmm you take good care just follow the Dance from a distance" the little boy's order
'Ready lady'
The man left the little boy who was daydreaming
'Hmp how to trap the mastermind behind this incident, Dad stupid he did not find out what happened and immediately believe the old grandfather, the old man, Grandparents also why should go to America and even leave the only grandchild here whose own family does not love him and care about him, continue also a mother should trust her own child... Huh sangggu stupid family is easily fooled hmp'In the little boy
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