System: Cruel Antagonist
1. Entering the world of novels

"How is Laura? You are a novelist, you know! So, you must be able to distinguish how the protagonist character with the antagonist character. Don't say it like it's the antagonist!" fathan Dirgantara's voice sounded thunderous filled his study.

"Well, one more! The reader is most fond of when the antagonist is cruel to the protagonist. Furthermore, when you see the process of changing a weak protagonist into a strong one, it will make our novel market explode. Not like this!"

"So, you have to be able to distinguish how the protagonist and which antagonists are! Yes, the antagonist is this kind of attention to the protagonist?"

Laura was downcast listening to the curation from the editor in Fathan's workspace. He is the editor appointed by the publisher to check all his works. Laura was so memorized by this arrogant male character.

"All right, Mas Fathan. I'll revise the script right now!"

Without saying anything, Fathan encouraged Laura to change some of the storylines that had just been examined. Because the novel will be printed and reproduced so it must be revised immediately. Despite feeling unwilling, and his heart refused, Laura Marrie was forced to change the storyline that had been arranged neatly.

After the revision, Laura immediately handed the manuscript to the Editor.. Fathan checked the revision results one by one with an expressionless cold face, in some time. Seeing the tragic end to the antagonist named Rivena Claudya, who was eventually sentenced to death for all the crimes she committed, Fathan's face looks satisfied.

"Whoever bothers me, be prepared to meet hell before the angel of death picks you up!"

Fathan repeats the words of Vena the cruel antagonist in the novel. His face showed something unpredictable while reading that sentence. Some time pondering about it, Fathan finally nodded his head.

"I'll call back!"

"Well? That all?" Laura was dissatisfied to hear the decision still hanging from Fathan. He has been struggling to come up with all the ideas that are not in accordance with the genre he usually writes. However, the editor's cold response made his heart hot, feeling unappreciated.

"Yes, you can come back!"

Laura, who had hoped to get a compliment, was only getting something unsatisfactory. He came out of the room feeling angry.

"You know, I'd better write a school story! I don't like to write bad characters in my work! Ahhh, I am so sorry!" it's tearing behind the editor's office door.

Laura left the publisher's office in a car from her hard work as a writer. With a feeling of annoyance, he drove forward the beloved vehicle that had accompanied him for almost five years at a very high speed.

But unfortunately, he forgot a famous death bend has taken a lot of casualties. He did not realize from the opposite direction that he was speeding up an expedition truck at high speed.

braaaakkk

A great accident cannot be avoided. Laura's vehicle immediately rattled and continued to be pushed in the opposite direction by the truck. The driver stopped his vehicle. Knowing the condition of the vehicle that collided with the truck he was carrying in a bad state, the truck driver immediately fled before the crowd arrived to see this incident.

Laura's condition, being pinched with a very heartbreaking situation. The head, nose, and mouth drain fresh d*rah. Laura's eyes dimmed at the snout of the truck right in front of her.

"Lord, I-I don't want to come back to You so soon. Give me a second chance. I still have a lot of things that I can't reach yet" Laura said softly. Gradually, Laura's eyes seemed to close perfectly.

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A knock on the door made Laura flinch from her sleep. He fell asleep sitting on his hands at a table. Slowly, Laura opened her eyes and straightened her body sitting on a chair.  Laura turned her head left, right, face, back.

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There was a knock on the door from the direction of this room. A moment later, Laura's eyes opened wide. He recalled that a few minutes ago he had just had a great accident.

Laura immediately checked her body condition. No one was hurt. Though he felt very confident his entire body had been crushed by the accident that had only been experienced a few minutes ago.

A sophisticated, and notoriously expensive mobile phone vibrates. Laura chuckled at the sight of the phone very similar to the thing she described as belonging to Rivena Claudya. An antagonist who he made as a female CEO who is very cruel character.

The phone is back vibrating. Laura became curious to see whose call. On the screen is a contact name Cindy. But leave it without answering the call because it feels not hers.

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Laura's eyes began to crisscross the room. He felt he did not know the place. Trying to get up, but immediately fell down because the shoes worn made his feet hurt. Laura's eyes were wide open looking at the thing under her feet. A pair of high heels with a height of fifteen centimeters, accented with natural stones, along the part of the shoe, is attached to both feet.

Laura took off her shoes. Realizing something different about her feet. This time the legs look very smooth, beautiful and well-groomed. Though he was so memorized that usually the foot is a lot of imprints due to his childhood innate.

"What a coincidence? Why is this all similar to the antagonist I wrote?" Laura is a monologue to herself.

Laura immediately opened the door that had been knocked by someone. It turned out that Laura's eyes immediately opened wide to see the super handsome man behind this door. A few seconds passed, Laura still looked at the man.

"Ekheeem."

Laura gasped at the deheman from this man. "Who?" Laura was confused and nervous.

The man pushed the door rough, so that it opened wider. His handsome face looked very angry and angry. He immediately strangled Laura, making Laura's breath become tight.

"Why did you* it?" Ask the unknown man.

The man's words reminded Laura of something she had memorized. It was the speech of a man named Fernando Jose, the actor he made as the male protagonist in the novel he wrote. The novel that upset him half-deadly to Fathan, the editor.

"Reply answer! Why did you kill him?" The man was still wrestling with Laura who was trying to take off the hand of this man who wanted to kill him. This is exactly the scene he wrote when Fernando Jose hit Vena in his office.

On a desk, a vibration is heard again indicating there is a call on a mobile phone. Laura moved about to pay attention to the phone she had seen.

Still a call from Cindy. Cindy is the name of Rivena's secretary in the novel she wrote. The vibration of the call made the man release both hands that wanted to finish his life.

Laura sat on the swivel chair behind the desk. He sipped the water in a glass.

"Welcome The World of Revenge in Love by Laura Marrie."

Laura seemed to hear a voice. His eyes wildly glanced at all sides of the room. However, none of him saw any man. There was only an unknown man continuously watching his behavior in silence.

"Are you looking for the origin of the sound?"

Laura's eyes were staring at all the corners of the room. There was fear and anxiety suddenly engulfing him. "Who are you?"

The man who had been watching him, became even more angry. Assuming the woman in front of him is acting to evade.

"I'm SYSTEM .. I'm the one who gave you a second life! I'm invisible, and it's only in your mind."

"What do you mean?" 

"Right now, you have been resurrected by the System after your death in the real world. However, on this second occasion, our Souls are brought into the world of your own novel. You must go on a mission as Rivena Claudya who becomes the antagonist in your work!"

"W-what? Don't you joke!" Laura biting her finger felt an overwhelming fear.

"You have to go on a mission to be Rivena Claudya according to what you write. Pronounce all the direct sentences delivered by Rivena Claudya without you changing."

Laura still bites her fingers. She recalled the tragic end of Rivena Claudya's life over the darkness of the Vena character she wrote. Laura just shook her head.

I don't want to be like that! I must avoid all the atrocities I write about. This is a second chance for me, her heart.

Laura shook her head, acting as if she had heard nothing. With a feeling of anxiety, Laura approached the man earlier. The fact that this man was the protagonist, made him dumbfounded. He did not expect, the work on the face of the actor, so exceeded expectations from his shadow.

The voice of the creature claiming to be a system was heard in his mind. "Don't forget, speak the strict word Vein to this male protagonist who is in front of you!"

Laura shook her head, then chose to sit opposite the man who had noticed the strange behavior he had made.

"Are you really crazy? Or just pretending to be crazy?" said the cold man.

Laura was still confused to begin with. Moreover, the man's attitude was very cold like ice. "So, what do you think, Brother Nando?"

"You've been trying to play games with me! Why did you do that to my confidant, huh?"

The System's voice came back to his mind. "Speak say it right now!" Laura still firmly shook her head, refusing the orders of the System.

"If you continue, be prepared to go to jail!"

Laura gave a cue, raising both of her hands. "Please! Do as you please!"

The protagonist named Fernando Jose got up, glancing at Vena with the tip of his eye. Then he left the Vena followed by a loud clashing sound from the door of the study.

The sound of the System was heard again, this time the voice sounded very angry. "Your mission failed! Be prepared with the punishment that will come to you!"

Laura got up to her chair. Suppressing a quick call against the secretary of Vena named Cindy. In the novel, she writes that Elsa is in a state of sadness after being scolded thoroughly by the antagonist Vena.

"Cindy, send a cookie parcel to an intern named Elsa!"

"Lhoh? Tumben, Mum? What's up, Mom?"

"Oh, it's nothing. I just feel guilty for scolding him."

"Good, Mom. I'll do it soon."

Suddenly, Laura's chest felt extremely tight. Something made him sick. He felt something stir from inside.

"Uhuk ... uhuk .. uhuk ...."

Laura spewed out a stifling d*rah on her chest. His eyes shook his head. It's not in his story. The sound of the system is back.

"Receive the punishment for non-compliance with the System that raised you to life!"

Laura immediately left the office without informing Cindy, her secretary.