System Noir

System Noir
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Rie!!! The ring!!! The ring!!!


"hoahhmmm.... Hello.." -...."Revan lazily picked up his phone.


"BROO!! WHERE ARE YOU GOING!!??"


Revan instantly kept his phone away from his ears as a loud, ear-splitting voice came out of his phone.


Revan recognized the owner of the voice, Aldi Firmansyah, a close friend of his since college. Now working as a bank clerk in the next town.


"what the hell is in..? woles we, still early in the morning screaming, hoahmm~" Revan was still writhing on his bed.


"Your head is 3 in the morning!! I'm thinking this afternoon ***! Uh, said you had an accident, huh? You okay bre?"


"You know where it's from?" Revan asked back while looking at the clock on his phone screen.


"jir at 3 o'clock, kelewat bangkong this mah, when was the last time I slept long like a gini?" he murmured inwardly while scratching his head that was not itchy.


"gua called Rijal, because your number is not active, he said you also quit work?, why? The fat (Badi) mecat you? He said you're ama the fat fight y?"


"iy, hp I admire because of that, so can not be on the phone, I digundurin myself emang, eh how to be a gossip you ask a lot?" revan grumbled because of the many questions from his friend.


"haha!! Friends out of misfortune it's natural to ask, continue what is your planning now?"


"Not yet to know, I'm looking for a new job, just not thinking what, Al, can activate m banking right where you are?"


Revan remembers his phone has not been registered m-banking, in this online era is troublesome for him if you have to always pegi to the Atm machine first to withdraw cash.


"Can, you send only type hp, KTP number, sm your Account number, mumpung cave in the bank nih"


"ok, ntar I sent, it's already, mw find food first me, ntar just let me know if udh can m-bankingku" Revan started to move from his bed and took a towel in his closet, there was already a demo in his stomach.


"ok, you tell the cave if there's any bre"


"flat" Revan replied as he hung up his phone, he noticed that there were a few more missed incoming calls from some numbers, but he ignored them and headed straight for the bathroom.


******


"uh.. This... Really me?" Revan stared at the mirror in his closet while turning his back.


He only realized the changes that occurred in his body, before his body was fairly thin tall, with a height of 175 with a weight of 55 kg, he was also often called the tall one when he went to college.


Now his body looks fuller, his muscles his arms and legs are toned, his chest looks field, not visible ribs are as usual as little as seen there, the sixpack stomach is perfect.


In short, his current body was the ideal body that many men craved for. Not too big, not too small, prospositional.


"Noir, is this a status change effect?"


Revan noticed his younger-looking face as he was 22 years old, only more handsome and more masculine now. Not narcissistic, but that's the truth.


...[.Yes, Physical Changes are based on the War God Body and with the adjustment of some aspects of the present master body]...


"continue, if my status is increased by a point, will his physical form change?"


Revan imagines his body changing like a bodybuilder full of muscle.


...[.No, the status point will affect the power, but it does not change the shape of the master's body]...


Revan was a little relieved to hear that. After he prepared, he went out of his boarding house to forage.


******


Late in the evening, Revan, who has no job, decides to enjoy the day.


Walking along the crowded street, Revan had a light feeling he had never experienced before.


He could not explain about his mood, perhaps because the workload and the burden of life (Dhea) were no longer there? He didn't take a dizzy, he would only enjoy it in the meantime.


Just as he was about to enter a mini market, and his gaze was fixed to the corner of the mini market parking lot.


There was a little girl dressed in rags, about seven or eight years old.


Revan approached the little girl.


The little girl was unkempt, her long black hair was very dirty and messy. His legs are abnormally curved, and appear to have severe atrophy(google).


As someone passed by in front of her, the little girl crawled up to her feet and shook the bowl gently. There was the sound of coins clinking in sound.


Revan looked down, and his gaze met the little girl. Although he was dirty and even gave off a pungent smell, his eyes were extremely clear.


"sister, help brother!” The little girl said, expectantly, while thrusting her bowl.


Revan, who saw the sad sight, took out two pieces of red money from his wallet, and put them in a bowl.


"Thank you very much, brother. May her brother's sustenance always be launched" The little girl bent her body many times. He looks very happy.


Revan was touched to see the little girl happily take 2 pieces of blue money, "want night, go home quickly, and have your mother cook a good meal"


Revan really felt that the little girl was pathetic. He was very young but had to suffer like this.


"Home?"


The little girl's tiny body trembled slightly, and her bright eyes became void. He lowered his head and muttered to himself "i don't have a home"


Even though it was slow, Revan could still hear it clearly.


"do you have no home? Your parents?" Revan was a little confused and nervous, he was afraid of mistalking to the little girl.


The little girl shook her head and then smiled softly, "big brother is good, thanks brother"


After which, he moved his tiny body with great difficulty and crawled away.


Revan stared at his departure with mixed feelings, finally he decided to quietly follow the little girl...


******


The girl finally crawled into a rather dark alley, where a young man was waiting for her.


Looking at the little girl, the young man stuffed the knife he had been playing with in his pocket and walked towards the girl. He looked down at the bowl he used to beg.


"Heeh, can it be good?" said the man taking the money from the bowl, he glanced at the frightened little girl, a grin appearing on his face.


YOKO!!!!


Without any warning, he kicked the little girl to the side.


"It's still fucking afternoon!! Why are you back here!!?? You think this has been a lot huh!!!? Or you don't want to work anymore, HUH!!? WANT TO BE HAJAR!?"


The young man put on a fierce face. He rolled up his sleeves and hurriedly grabbed the little girl's hair and lifted her entire body into the air.


"Ah aw's... Sick!!! It hurts!!! Forg... It hurts.."


His feet lifted off the ground, and the intense pain made him cry. The otu girl pleaded.


"Why are you crying!? You don't want to work, do you!?"


The young man slapped him with his hand.


PLAKK!!


PLAKK!!


He hit her again. Loud slaps landed on the girl's face consecutively, without caring about her at all.


The little girl cried withstanding the pain, tears started to flow from her eyes.


...__________...


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