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47. Purple Hater's

A few days later ....

Nara seems sad when she is reading a comment from one of the new readers of her novel, although in fact it is a constructive criticism, but it still makes Nara go straight down.

'What's this writing? Not neat, the punctuation of the ancur, the capital letters ngawur. Just won the story idea doang interesting.'

'It is better to learn the rules of writing first, learn PUEBI. Search the internet, or can join in authorship groups to learn to write the right.'

And, there are many more that are delivered by the reader in the name of 'purple hater', which essentially he criticizes Nara's writing which is considered very messy.

"Hey, why is your face suddenly so moody?" asked Imel who had just entered the room after he served the buyer. Imel was surprised when he saw Nara who had previously looked happy, now turned moody while looking at her phone.

"Here, I read the comments again. He said my writing was a mess, told to study PUEBI and the others first. Well ... if you can comment like this, I will be afraid to write again," said Nara who almost cried, because the more down, the words of Purple Hater getting spicy.

"Not taken by heart. In fact, comments like this must be made into a whip, so you can be better in the future. Come on, think positive. Maybe this is the way to make you successful as a writer."

Nara nodded. "Well, I have to learn about the rules of writing. You see, for some reason since I knew the online novel, I was like living again. And, once I started writing, I found myself. So, I shouldn't give up just because of comments like this." Nara clenched her hands to encourage herself.

"Good, you must learn more, and then show your best work to silence the mouth of a reader like him."

"Yes, then now I want to learn the rules of writing first."

Imel nodded with a smile. "Yes, the spirit yes," replied Imel as he clenched his hand to encourage Nara.

Nara smiled as she nodded, and then she started working on the search engine, and also looking for authorship groups through her personal social media.

One by one the authorship group started Nara pinta to join, even Nara also took writing classes for free in literacy groups that provided their material through WA groups.

Days passed, changing with the moon. Spicy comments that initially made him down, have now become a turning point for his current achievements. Now there are even other writers who began to praise Nara's writing so neat, and Nara also feel happy because now her work is becoming more pleasant to read.

'Well, this is true. Capital letters are used at the beginning of a sentence in a direct passage. So, your writing at that time was wrong, because you use lowercase letters. And, his punctuation marks have now also started to do much right. So, you have progress in writing.'

'But you have to keep learning. If you can learn to make cliffhanger, let your story more interesting. And, there is much more you have to learn from the science of writing. Learn slowly while writing, later you can also.'

Nara was shocked when she read the comment, after several months she never got a comment from Purple Hater, now the person reappears. However, this time the language was better read than that time.

"Alhamdulillah ... This guy turned out to be good huh. But, I don't want to say thank you ah, wrong he himself used to say I mess. But, I'm also stupid because I didn't learn the science of writing first." Nara laughed to herself given her stupidity at that time.

But when Purple Hater said it was stupid, he cried because he was upset, because people could say it was stupid openly, even though they did not know each other. And, from then on, Nara hated this Purple Hater account.

However, the hatred has now begun to melt, because it turns out Purple Hater seems like a good person, because he is not stingy to share a little knowledge for Nara's progress as a writer.

However, Nara had just felt peace after reading the two comments, now she got a new notification from Purple Hater again, but this one again made Nara feel annoyed again.

'This is a plot hole. Huh, I thought you were smart, it was still stupid, huh!'

'If you study really dong!'

After reading the comment, Nara immediately threw her phone on the bed in annoyance.

"What's? Hole plot? What is a plot hole? Why so many terms in writing? Just make my head frown. Dan, he! It's good to know a fool as he pleases. Huh, mending you it is not necessary to read my novel if it only makes me ashamed like this," grumbled Nara annoyed, he was really embarrassed to be fooled in such a blatant way.

"By the way, who is this guy? Why am I so familiar with his comments?" muttered Nara who was curious about the account called Purple Hater.