
Chapter 2
Note: Our male leader Luo Binghe appears in this chapter! Still a lot of footnotes but less than Chapter 1.
Shen Yuan could never understand why this extreme savage villain, Shen Qingqiu, had this kind of attitude. Wh-wh-what for?
Shen Qingqiu's original family was rich and she could at least be considered a wealthy second generation descendant. He has two older brothers who will inherit the family business in the future and a younger sister whom he loves. Their feelings are very good.
He already knew that even if he didn't mean much in life, he wouldn't be lacking a mouthful of rice. 1 But perhaps it is because its environment is developing very easily and less in competition so as long as the number of competitors is more than ten, getting ranked in the first ten is considered a good result for him.
Therefore, he never shared the same language as those who wanted to dominate the world.
This original Shen Qingqiu had some skills and qualifications. He also pretended to have more than he had. Not lacking in reputation, there was no need to worry about money as a member of the world's number one sect; why did he have to keep fighting with the grassroots protagonist, no need to worry about money, his brain worked all day to calculate how to insult the protagonist and incite others to join?
Even if Luo Binghe was a genius who was sent to heaven and was extremely strong, to compare herself with ........there is no need to be jealous to this degree, right?
Still, you can't blame this savage villain for being so lousy. In the novel, this kind of savage villain is like a goldfish in a river, breeding everywhere. He's just one of many.
What's to be done? The greatest BOSS of the novel is its own protagonist. How do fireflies shine like the sun and moon?
He gained respect in the cultivation world because of 'Sword Xiu Ya, ' so his natural talent could not be considered too bad.
For the time being, Shen Qingqiu looked left and right, pleased even though her skin was like the color of a mush in the bronze mirror.
This person's appearance was neat with two black eyebrows and thin lips, which were born to look like a scholar. Plus his slim and long legs, he could be considered a handsome man. Although his actual age could not bear the thought of 2, this was a cultivation novel; shen Qingqiu nurtured his inner strength and thus he maintained the appearance of the youth perfectly. As he read the book to fill his mind, the quality of his appearance doubled. 3
Although there was no way to compare with Luo Binghe.
As soon as he thought of Luo Binghe, Shen Qingqiu's brain felt an immense pain.
He wanted to take a look now at Luo Binghe who was currently silent in the wooden shed, but before he could take a step, another alarm sounded in his mind.
【Warning! Ooc warning! 'Shen Qingqiu' would not take the initiative to look at Luo Binghe. 】
Shen Qingqiu angrily said: Fine. Then I'll send someone to take her, this should be fine. '
He thought for a moment, then exclaimed: "Ming Fan!"
From outside the door, a boy of about sixteen darted in, tall and skinny, and said, “Murid this is here. What is shifu's order? ”
Shen Qingqiu was unwilling to look at him again. He could be considered decent, just having a bad appearance. 4 In his heart he lamented: It turned out that he was a piece of cannon. 5
This was Shen Qingqiu's original top disciple, Luo Binghe's senior apprentice-brother, Ming Fan.
This was the legendary lowest level of cannon fodder!
Needless to say about shutting Luo Binghe out of the dorm overnight or intentionally giving her the wrong login password, these kinds of things she had. Whenever Shen Qingqiu felt a deep sense of vengeance and wanted to torture Luo Binghe, the most trustworthy and excited assistant was Ming Fan.
Knowing the end of this person's story, Shen Qingqiu looked at this child and felt quite empathetic towards him because they were in the same ship: "Bring Binghe here. ”
Ming Fan's heart thought: Why shifu calls him Luo Binghe, he always calls her 'that little beast,' ',' 'mixed blood,' 'growth,' 6 and uses these names quite often. Why did he suddenly call her so familiar?
But of course he did not dare to question his shifu orders, so he immediately ran to the wooden shed and kicked the door, shouting: “Exit! Shizun7 called you! ”
Shen Qingqiu paced around in the room, fully examining the system in her mind.
The system answered it.
【Poin is the scoring method used. The higher your points, the better the job. 】
So how do I increase points?
【1. Change weak plots and fix the mistakes of junk villains and other supporting characters; 2. Avoid mines; 3. Keep the protagonist cool; 4. Uncovering a secret scenario. 】
Shen Qingqiu analyzed everything deeply, one by one.
He meant: He not only had to whip the donkey of rotten masterpieces that were Shen Qingqiu's original form, but also make sure the other characters didn't make a mess either;
He didn't even know if he could maintain his precious little life, but he still had to make sure that the coolness showed the protagonist and his girls no less;
Not only was the plot hole created by the author unfilled, he also had to personally shovel and close the hole himself.
Hehe .
As Airplane Towards The Sky said, this novel "Proud Immortal Demon Way" had a very clear purpose. Every word written is for one purpose, and that is coolness.
Perhaps after the male protagonist is blackened, he begins to play innocent, pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, 8 keeping watch against the intrigue of prostitutes, and becoming cold enough to turn the sky upside down. That's why the work became popular, the longer it was to the point that the book was longer than its binding.
So Shen Qingqiu thought, but her task of clearing the plot made the pressure on her immense. The mines were buried everywhere, he could not be certain that he would be able to avoid everyone!
Shen Qingqiu: 'What kind of plot is considered not bad?'
【There is no standard, it depends on the subjective feeling of the reader. 】
Pause, Shen Qingqiu then asked: 'Then how many points need to be collected for the initial stage to begin?'
System: 【It will be determined by certain circumstances. When the requirements have been met, you will be automatically notified. 】
Experiencing the problem and its analysis actually applied balm. 9
Shen Qingqiu sneered. Hearing the door, he stepped back and saw a boy walking in.
Although agitated, he was still able to stand up straight and say: “Shizun. ”
Shen Qingqiu formed a three-quarters smile before she stiffened.
Will die! Against this person who would meet and injure an eighty-year-old woman holding a daughter, as a person who so badly damaged the face of a male protagonist like this, he would absolutely die!
But, even though she endured such abuse, the broken face of the protagonist proved that she was still worthy of being called the protagonist!
Luo Binghe's pair of eyes were bright like morning stars. A small embryo that is handsome, nice, and soft;
Seemed resolute and humble, showing his noble and unyielding character;
His straight and tall stature, which was better to break than bow!
Suddenly met with this sight, Shen Qingqiu's heart broke the words she was about to say, ruffling all of her rhetoric and causing countless words to befall each other in her mind, so much so that he almost said it all!
Fortunately, Shen Qingqiu was on a steep cliff, but her mind screamed from a fall. This protagonist is too good, he can barely hold it!
He watched as Luo Binghe slowly hobbled through the door, trying to kneel down. The corner of Sheng Qingqiu's mouth twitched. Inside, he thought that this old woman was unable to accept your bow10. If you submit to me today, one day in the future, my kneecap will be finished off by you! So he immediately stopped her and said: "No need. ”
He pulled out his hand and took out a small bottle: “This is medicine. "She ended her words with a sarcastic tone:" Don't let others look and think that my Qing Jing Peak is harassing disciples. ”
Shen Qingqiu entered her role very quickly. He had great guts to try the act of giving medicine to him, but made sure he chose to use an evil attitude in line with Shen Qingqiu's original hypocritical character.
As expected, the system did not issue an OOC notification. Shen Qingqiu heaved a sigh of relief.
Luo Binghe thought that shizun called him to follow through with teaching more. "He didn't think it was to give him medicine. Shocked for a moment, he then raised his hand in a respectful manner, sincerely thanking: "Thank you for the cure, shizun. ”
Luo Binghe was filled with childishness, her smile full of sincerity, like a warm sun hitting the horizon.
Shen Qingqiu stared for a moment, then turned her face away.
This male protagonist before being blackened was truly a good child model, brilliant as the sun. He is the type of person who if you give him one point he will guarantee to return you ten points. It's not wrong to say he's a little sheep.
Luo Binghe happily said: "This disciple will multiply his efforts in the future, will not let shizun be disappointed. ”
Uh, but, if you double your efforts then your real shizun will be a really disappointed person ……
If Shen Qingqiu did not read the "Proud Immortal Demon Way" and saw this scene, her heart would hurt to Luo Binghe and she had shed sympathetic tears.
However, he had read the novel from beginning to end and knew all of Luo Binghe's mental activities after her blackness. On the surface, his face was like a simple man but deep down he was thinking about how to pull his skin and bones to expose reality.
【Luo Binghe smiled slightly and said: 'Unfortunately this disciple suffered in the past, he will come back to you now eight times bigger. To hurt my hand, I will grind all four of your limbs to dust. 】
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After which, he actually cut Shen Qingqiu into a human stick. 11
Say he wants to do something to you, he will. Can't beg for life, can't beg for death. A character like this was like the domineering and cool king he made years later. The essence of it can be summed up in a few words: "Hehe, you stupid sucker. ”
That was why even though Luo Binghe's current situation was sympathetic, Shen Qingqiu could only think more about her own future fate.
In short, no matter how sad Luo Binghe was now, she was also the person in the future whose feet stomped on her head and laughed ferociously.
Shen Qingqiu sat on the sandalwood chair, choosing to speak in a careless tone: "Binghe, how did you progress in cultivation?"
Hearing "Binghe" coming out of his mouth gave him goosebumps. Luo Binghe's back also felt trembling, but she still showed a timid smile: “Murid is stupid, and. ”
Shen Qingqiu hated him; heaven knew she wanted to pick up a loudspeaker and roar next to Luo Binghe's ear: You fake-hearted person, it's already good enough if you don't go crazy. 12 Being able to do the basics is not bad! Did you screw me, son! Let this teacher point you in the right direction!
The demon's warning was heard again. Shen Qingqiu inwardly shouted to the system: I just thought, can't I do that ?! Of course I know this is a violation! '
He casually said, “Today I punished you because I was anxious. Time passed . Come to think of it, you've been apprenticing under me for quite some time. How old are you this year? ”
Luo Binghe obediently said, This “Murid is fourteen years old. ”
Oh Fourteen .
Shen Qingqiu's Help. '
In other words, all this time that Shen Qingqiu had been guiding Luo Binghe, she had already endured the punishment of kneeling at the gate incident, the quarrel incident of Qing Jing's students, who were 'contrary' to the shizun incident, tampering with devices and being punished Incidents of hard work .. and so on, on this glorious track.
—End Chapter 2—