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Fathur Hamdi and Finished


In all of Ness's explanations, Ness lied a little, saying that she had been an agent for a long time when she was only a few months old.


The uncle and aunt who heard all of Ness' explanations were a little surprised because what she was most worried about later was that this agent was irresponsible and did not take care of her.


"Honestly, I really appreciate my uncle and aunt's son so I dare to speak frankly. Moreover, I remember that Zain will soon be 18 years old in 1 month. It's the right age and time to take her to Europe."


"If uncle is still in doubt, I will tell uncle an epiphany, perhaps uncle understands the meaning of this sentence I will speak of. Indonesia is in Asia but Asia is still Asia, when compared to Europe, they have a very big gap."


Zain's father immediately bowed his head and digested the sentence Ness had said just now. He also understood this, but he was still worried that his son would be in trouble.


Zain's father soon sees Zain and finds his son's hopeful face.


"One more thing, maybe Zain was not alone. I will bring 1 more person from Surabaya city. Maybe Zain could be friends with him later and share the hardships of being there."


Soon the faces of uncle and aunt became a little bright especially Zain who knew that he would have friends from Indonesia who were in Europe later.


Finally after a lengthy explanation, Ness managed to convince both of them and immediately signed Zain as the first player under his banner.


Ness also explained that he will only take 8% of the contract amount Zain including sponsors later. There was no debate when Ness said the agent's fees.


Before Ness leaves, Ness explains to Zain to prepare in 2 - 3 days to prepare all his needs. The uncle and aunt who heard him immediately said yes, they will also take care of this and take him to the airport.


After exiting the cafe, Ness immediately went again to Surabaya. Ness did not want to wait anymore, she was afraid that the conversation would be as difficult as it is now and wasted a lot of time.


...


The next day, the,


Ness was already in the city of Surabaya, he arrived at night, but seeing the time was late he decided to continue it tomorrow morning.


While on her way to Surabaya, Ness finds Fathur's Instagram and gives him a message that she wants to meet him and his parents.


The other party who was initially scared as the message arrived and suspicious became calmer as Ness directly explained her intentions.


At 11 pm, Ness was in a fairly simple house, in front of him there were 2 men where one old and one young.


They are Fathur and his father.


"Maybe I don't need to explain more about my intention to come here, maybe my uncle has also listened to the explanation of my uncle's son who received a message from me."


"So I came here only to hear uncle's answer to allow him or not uncle's son to go with me to Europe."


Fathur's father immediately thought of Ness' words, in fact he had thought about it from last night but heard directly he was still a little worried but remembered his son's dream when he was 15 years old, he looked at his son and saw his son's hopeful face but he also found a hint of worry in his eyes. Maybe he understood the worry that was in his eyes, it was likely about him who would later live alone here.


Ness also knows the condition of the Fathur family and comforts a bit by explaining all the circumstances that will happen in the future if Fathur succeeds.


Eventually the conversation also became more relaxed and Fathur was successfully signed as the second player under the banner of Ness.


Ness explained that he would take a fee of 8% of the contract amount Fathur would receive including his sponsor, the other party did not mind and there was no debate.


Ness explained to prepare all her needs and will leave tomorrow.


Ness went out and went back to the hotel where she stayed last night.


On the way to the hotel, Ness smiled brightly as she got some presents this time around. His guess is true that when he signs a player he will get a prize.


The sound of the system is heard, but Ness ignores it because she doesn't want to waste time.


He instantly opened the virtual screen of the system within his mind.


He said he wanted to open the gift he received.


Ness ends up collecting a gift this time in the form of,


Silver level player card x2, bronze level player card x2, and also points by 80 points.


He now has 120 points.


He also wanted to open his gift, but soon he heard the most annoying sound, his stomach was ringing with hunger.


Ness also realized that she had not eaten again except last night when she arrived in Surabaya.


He got out of the hotel and found a place to eat.


10 Minutes later.


Ness finds a restaurant, Ness immediately orders the food she wants to eat.


45 Minutes later, though,


Ness finished eating and was going back to the hotel, she immediately stood up from her seat and did not look back first, she felt that she had hit something.


Ness immediately turned around and saw that she hit a restaurant employee.


He also helped her stand up.


"I'm sorry I didn't see that."


Ness explained while helping the restaurant employee.


"It's okay, brother, I was wrong not to see earlier."


The employee said softly because his employee was a woman.


After Ness helped, she apologized once more and left the employee.


The female employee saw Ness leaving and felt that she felt something soft.


He did not expect that such a handsome man would be so kind.


Ness who was noticed by the officer did not look back and continued to leave.


He walked out and walked leisurely to the hotel.


On the way, Ness thought of all the plans ahead. He is also thinking about how to plan after he returns to Europe with the 2 players.


Ness suddenly realized, he remembered that he had not asked if they could speak English or not.


Ness immediately felt a sense of guilt, he did not expect himself to be less thorough.


Maybe because he was too excited and just explained the interest to bring the two players to Europe to forget the most basic, but also the most important thing.


Soon Ness took out her phone and asked if she could speak English. But Ness found the answer a relief, saying that she could speak a little English, but they also said that it was relatively normal for her fluency to speak English.