
Please do not comment other than the story. Writers Need Advice and Advice. Not a bad comment. Writers don't need that.
If you don't like. Please leave my story. Free to read, but only 1-star love. It is better not to be given stars.
If my story is ugly. Please in maklumi. I'm a novice writer. You also do not waste money to buy coins. Read to read. So do not give comments that make the author fall.