Take My Life
chapter 11's

The air inside this stuffy room is decorated by cigarette smoke and the laughter of everyone gathered in it, whether it's funny or not.

The dance floor that reflects the twinkling lights and minimal lighting there makes the atmosphere more concentrated with the thump of music.

Ami and Nathalia as usual. Sit in front of the bartender, before finally getting down to the dance floor to refresh this long evening.

"Crazy! I thought you were right to be banned" said Ami by bringing his face close to the ears of Nathalia. To clarify his words. It was impossible to speak normally with such a loud music.

"Yes so" replied lazy nathalia the girl played the lip of her drinking glass with her index finger. The girl was actually troubled by this situation.

Only toddlers go to play with adults, right?

Yes now, at the club tonight the presence of Nathalia is not only accompanied by Ami. Because this time Ray who was sitting on the sofa on the second floor came to accompany him.

Club night is not a new world for Ray. In fact, the man is called one of the ladykiller men there. If he usually comes to spend the night with the girls.

This time he came to look after the girls. Maybe the word tired and bored has often felt the sturdy and white man.

Tired of continuing to advise, tired of continuing to scold his sister who has now changed. If there's no other way to stop his sister's new personality.

Ray chooses to follow his sister's new personality. As it is today, the sharp eye never escaped to notice Nathalia's movements accompanied by a bottle of drink in her hand.

"Come on*****" Ami now begins dragging Nathalia to the dance floor. With occasional eye lentiknya pay attention to the good looks of his best friend's brother.

They're dancing. Raising his hands as if he was really lulled by the rhythm and sound of loud music. With her eyes closed Nathalia let her body dance as if releasing all the burdens that had accumulated in her heart and mind.

Nathalia wore a black dress of spaghetti straps that contrasted sharply with her white skin. Ami and Nathalia looked unshakably dancing with whoever the man was there.

He saw his brother coming down to the dance floor. Making Ray who was on the second floor of this room to be vigilant. The man was seen rising from his seat and standing in front of the second-floor fence, to expand his vision.

There were a few girls who asked her to be with him. It turns out Ray's intention here this time really changed. No longer meeting their biological needs.

The flashback

The long haired girl had prepared in a black dress that showed off her curves. As she was rubbing a bright red lipstick onto her lips.

Tok tok !

The door to his room was knocked. Then without waiting for an answer from Nathalia, the door of the room opened displaying a handsome figure that a few hours ago made her cry.

Seeing her brother was neat with his casual clothes. Looks like the guy with the undercut haircut is going out.

"Where are you going?" Nathalia asked who was looking at her brother from the mirror.

"Of course enter your new world"

Nathalia turned to her "You're kidding Ray?!"

"This is only atha. This is the only way I understand your way of thinking"

"You're crazy!" Nathalia Bentak

"Do you want papa and mama back crying kare-"

"okay.. Ray okay" the Nathalia won't prolong the debate, which she says is time-consuming. While out there as usual Ami has been waiting for him.

"Just watch me!"

"Don't bother me. Let's say we don't know there or I'll--"

"OK" cut Ray doesn't want to hear his sister's threats. Just remembering it makes Ray have to withstand tightness in the chest. Almost four times he lost a baby who has now grown up.

The second time the accident nathalia with his best friend axelin.

third and fourth when the girl's depression hit. Ray should be grateful to no longer find his sister crying in silence. Or shut yourself up all day in the room.

But this change was also not expected by Ray. If Nathalia used to not like to wear clothes that lack materials. Now all his clothes almost showed his curves.

Everything's turned bad.

"If anyone is harassing you, should I keep quiet?"

"Just harass ray! Not more!"

Flashback off

Nathalia's last warning and her sister's threat become the main capital for Ray to take pains to restrain his movement.

As bad as any man. Surely he will not be willing if the girl he loves becomes a striped man's meal. Moreover, the girl was his beloved sister.

"Nobody touched Ray" Ray muttered to himself to make sure his sister was okay.

While on the dance floor Nathalia and Ami still continue to dance with some young mudiya. They are as though they are dissolving in their every move.

"I'm tired of tha! I had a drink first" said Ami, now walking away from Nathalia to return to their table.

Nathalia still enjoys her pleasure. Move his body to follow sexy music with a fast pace.

"Only?" A man's voice disturbs Nathalia's pleasure.

Suddenly the girl opened her eyes and looked up to see the face of the person who was bothering her.

Nathalia's sharp eyes greeted the man's sweet smile. Nathalia turned around ignoring him. And continue to enjoy the soothing rhythm of music according to him at this time.

"I miss you" said the man so close behind Nathalia's ears.

If it's normal Nathalia will push the man away.

But this time Nathalia just kept quiet and ignored the man . Nathalia remained silent even though the man's hands gently stroked her hands.

Nathalia just doesn't want to destroy tonight with a veiled vexation. If he was upset about Ray's presence. Now he is upset by the presence of kharel

Kharel was one of the men he dated but he forgot when he decided on this man. Kahrel had been broken up by Nathalia in a painful manner. How not when kharel did not accept the decision, Nathalia instead shouted as if he was a victim of abuse.

And this is what makes Nathalia more intense to change. Loving the night world. Because for him there is no man who deserves to be happy because a man as good as Axelin alone must die like that.

What else is a man like a kharel whose head is only a chest and a collar. The man broke women's hearts many times. Then Nathalia was determined to make the man feel his pain in his heartbreak and humiliation.

As Kahrel's hand gently clasped onto Atha's slim waist and his other hand almost touched the girl's sensitive body.

His body was interested and

Bug off!!!

A death fist struck his handsome face Karel. To make the man fall to the floor and make the young men away so as to create a distance between the three humans.

Who else if not Kharel, Nathalia and

Ray!

"You!" Snapped kharel who tried to stand up and wipe away the blood running down his nose.

Ray's gaze was flat as if he was currently watching a movie on tv. Nathalia is already in front of Ray to hold back what will happen next.

"Who are you meddling in my business!" Kharel grieved not to accept Ray's treatment of him.

"Me?" A strange grin emanated from ray's lips.

"I'm her husband!" Said Ray making beautiful by clutching tightly his sister's body. While Nathalia just rolled her eyes did not accept the words of her brother just now.

Meanwhile up there on the second floor was seen a man chuckling amusedly at the scene. The man who had been watching Nathalia from afar.

TB

hiya2 hello??

what is Lauro ama Nathalia?? tulungin wkwm they are the same as ama love past 😂 kapok lu ay sp tell start story with conflict.

emang best nulis pack Plot twist yak 😂😂😂 kek gini dizzy sndiri MAMPOS 😂😂😂😂

it's the conflict and maybe 😂 in front of g there will be conflict again.masi maybe yes 😂😂😂😂😂