YOUNG DETECTIVE

YOUNG DETECTIVE
16. Heartfelt adoration


Huh...stupid...begooo...begooo...ckck.... Why can I just mess up? I wish I could take her heart, but it's fucked up like this. When am I here? I want to go with him too.. Deval could only curse the unlucky fate that befell him at this moment. 


He idolized Via very much from the first moment he saw the girl while solving the problem that was entwining his uncle with the loan shark. The uncle who complained his debt was inexhaustible even though he had paid on time. But the executioner continued to raise interest rates so that the debt that had been paid had more than tripled borrowed.


When reporting the incident to the police, the reported loan shark seemed to provide a file in the form of proof of payment that had been manipulated. So the police considered the uncle was lying to simply release the obligation to pay the debt and instead blamed his uncle who dared to try to borrow money in a facility that did not have a proper permit.


The uncle was frustrated, and Via offered his services without asking for payment. Even though he is a private detective whose incidentals make a large honor in every task done.


At that time Deval and Devan were still first grade Junior High, and it seemed that the age of the Via Little Detective was the same age as him. At the time, he was still being escorted by senior detectives, who might be from the same agency as him. But to the best of his knowledge, the one who actually revealed the case to its fullest is Detective Via himself. He who examines the evidence, and searches everything to the smallest evidence that no other adult investigator has ever thought of.


Finally the uncle managed to free from the dark circle, and the loan shark was successfully put in prison. It was early they were interested in investigative and criminal matters. Whining to their parents and finally the father agreed to the twins' wish to study with a senior investigator who happened to be the father's brother. 


Deval gets a photo of Detective Via from his uncle, and is treated well every day. Wherever the photo was taken until it became Bullyan material from his friends. 


"Hahaha, Lo dreams of heights..Where would a great Detective like a cupu creature like Lo?"


"If you want to be a detective too, now please investigate why ants can shake hands every time they meet their friends?"


"Investigate also why the gecko sounds 'tokek'.."


Because of his friend's bullyan, Deval tried to change his appearance The hair oil that was always worn by his mother, washed and left his hair mane loose to fall down to cover his forehead.


He smiled proudly to himself, "Waaahhh... Turns out I'm handsome too like this Via?" He spoke with a photo of Via he had. Then it replaced the style again when using wax, all her hair was erected, hmmmm.. "Where do you think? How do I think it's weird?" Still looking at the photo Via and then overhauled again.. 



"Walaaaahhh.Mama's son, very cute.." The mother suddenly entered Deval's room, followed by Devan who was also giggling. In Deval's hand, the mother saw a photo of Via which she knew it had been obtained from her brother in Bandung. "Waaaahh... Mama's son otewe become a bachelor child.. soon will bring a girl to the house huh?"


Shamed Deval, tells his mother and twin sister to leave him alone. Mama came out with a smile, followed by Devan's giggling.


"There's pubescent.." chirped Devan.


"Whataa?" deval shouted furiously, and Devan immediately fled to hide behind the mother..


"Udah.alah.ke clever say people puberty all. Do you know what puberty is?" Ask the mother..


Devan just shook his head, "I just follow Mama said, Mama said Deval was pubescent, yes I follow too." he said innocently .


The mother was shocked, patting her mouth, "Oh, Mama's mouth is yes. Sometimes Mama likes khilaf origin talking in front of you…"


"Puber.puber.puber.." Devan still teases Deval, sneering.


Deval sharpens his eyes on Devan, "Awas Lo ya. Catch me bacok!"


"Husss..husss.what the hell is Nak.." the mother calmed Deval, "Puber is fitrah kok Val. It must have been passed by all humans. It is a transition from childhood to adulthood. So now Deval is an adult. Already experienced falling in love." explained the mother.


Deval nodded, "That means that Deval can bring Mama to the dong market? Not like Devan was a child." said Deval felt victorious from Devan.


"Devan is an adult too." said his twin did not want to lose.


"Udah.already..don't fight anymore!" lerai the Mother, "Devan! You do your homework in your room! Deval, if you've finished the styles, you finish the room you've been randomized this."


"Will there be aunt Mah?" reject Deval.


"It's punishment! Don't argue! After that, Om Gunawan will invite you to learn to investigate again…"


Devan and Deval are forced to nod and perform an ultimatum from the mother.


"I got angry because of Devan ni Via." he complained to the photo of Via that he still holds.


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A knock on the door, the mother moved from the sofa where she was sitting to open the door. It turned out to be Via, Sabrina and Devan.


"How is Deval Ma now?" ask Devan. "Where's dad?" the father was not seen in the room.


"Papa again goes home, take the necessary equipment for you to keep here. If Deval, Yaaa, maybe because it is still a painkiller, Deval has gone to sleep again. He's been asking you guys for so long, he said…" 


Via walked over to the edge of Deval's bed, "Yes Aunty, that's okay. If he's asleep, we go home, Auntie…"


Suddenly Deval awakens and grabs Via's hand as soon as possible, "Don't go!"


"Kok suddenly the jutek became a gini crybaby?" devan Goda.


"Silence Lo!" deval ketus.


"Better Lo rest a lot Val. let's get well soon, and soon school…"


"Yes, I'm resting. But can't you be here any minute?"


Via turned towards the watch, "now it's been quite Val's night. I also have to do my job tomorrow. I'll go back to school and come here…"


Deval's eyebrows go up next door, "It turns out Lo's school too?"


"Yes, I'm in school, but I still have to study…"


"My parents don't like that. They want me to be able to interact with my peers as well. But yes.reality..."


"Ooohh... It's good that the mind of Lo's parents like that.. If that's Lo school where?"


Via just smiled knot, "Yes around here aja. not far away really.." Though we often meet, the inner.


"Who knows next time I can pick it up?"


"Ciiiye.  Cieee ..there's a dawn attack.." seduced Devan, then think again, "now night huh? That's how it is. dipepet continued the idol of his heart…" 


Devan's words made Via feel embarrassed, his face became hot.  How insolent Devan, make me ashamed in front of his mother, the inner girl with the hue of cherries on her cheeks. 


"Silence Lo!" said Deval annoyed glared at Devan.


Irin was just mesem-mesem hearing an absurd conversation he thought it was. Seeing the face of Via first meeting this was strange for him. Though there was always a good one next to him, even his love like this, Irin spoke in his heart.


"Ma, can you leave me alone with Via first?" pinta Deval who was feeling upset continued to be bullied by her twin.


"Eeeiiit. Can't be left alone Ma . What kind of demon is the third?" sela Devan's.


The mother immediately pinched Devan's waist.. "Awww.pain Mah …"


"Lo the demon!" aspersons Deval.


"Sssstttt.." The mother began to lose her temper. "You're Devan, keep disturbing Deval. Let her talk to her first love." The beautiful mother was lost. Awakened and closed his mouth glancing at Deval, and the man on the brangkar frowned.


Wonderful to have a brother and mother who have difficulty holding back their inner, inner speech.. Oiya, Devan's nature is down from Mama.


"Yes, we go out first. What is certain Deval will not be able to assort the same Via right…? If it can still be various, Mama believes Via easily paralyze this sickly human," said the mother. Then the mother, Devan, and Irin came out to make room for the two of them to talk.


"I'm sorry, my family's on all the undercarriage…"


"Yes, it's okay.I'm happy to see the familiarity of your family…"


Finally, Deval breathed a sigh of relief, like releasing the thing from earlier made his feelings tense, afraid Via was embarrassed by the state of his family that the bucket leaked all.


"What about what Lo said? Really offered to learn this same brother who was said from BOS?"


"Yes, later on. I permission used to be the same boss BOS. Now you have to be eager to heal…"


"Via, I know this is not the right time, let alone my condition like this. But honestly, I find it hard to keep it.."


Via is aware that Deval will express his feelings. But he doesn't feel ready for it. His work and school were enough to take up time. The work involved is quite dangerous for the people around him. Keeping Irin alone was enough to trouble him, if coupled with Deval, it would even make everything more chaotic, and the burden of his mind even more.


"Via... Do you have someone you like? or maybe a girlfriend???" Via was silent for a long time, because it was cool with his mind, it made Deval become impatient, "Via?" snapped it.


Finally Via returned to his body after a moment of flying out of nowhere, "Hmmm…"


"So you want me to be a driver or motorcycle taxi driver for you?"


Although the way to convey Deval feels funny to him, but he feels this time is not right for them, "Hmmm.. Val... I want to be clear yes, let Lo not be more misunderstood. I can't yet…"


"Can't what?" Deval interrupted before Via finished speaking with a slight snatch.


"Please, don't cut it before I'm done…!!"


"Yes, Via, Lo can go." His face and voice instantly turned cold..


"Listen to my explanation first Val, I.m not allowed.punya …"


"Gue says Lo can go home." cut Deval back and throw his face.


"Val... Want to hear my explanation not really?"


In the heart of Deval was screaming, he realized Via rejected him. Whatever the reason, for him it was a rejection. Rejected by the girl he adored a few years ago. Instantly his self-esteem and confidence fell. Before this he had been convinced that Via also had the same taste, seeing his body language lately treating Deval. But why did Via reject him?


"Val..Dengerin me…"


"Gue wants a break.. You can go home. I'll be grateful if we don't meet first." he said coldly without looking at Via. 


"Yes, it's up to Lo .." Via came out angrily, "Cemen!" he cursed and opened the door violently and threw it away.


"Who's that slamming the door?" hardik nurse.


Devan and his mother were surprised to see the look on his face and the actions of Via just now. Via pulled Irin and Irin just obediently followed the completely silent Via, leaving the place without a say.


While Deval's face was expressionless, it was extremely cold in his silence.


"Eeeh... Vi... Do we go home? No say first?"


Suddenly Via stopped, "Oh. Yes. Please tell Aunt and Devan.."


Irin nodded and went back to see the mother and the child to say goodbye...


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