Abandoned House (True Story)
Opening & Introductions
Prolegomenon
First of all the author wants to say a lot of thanks to all the speakers who have taken the time to give testimony to give birth to this simple story.
Not to forget the Author's thanks to all the Reader who have chosen this story to fill the free time with a positive response. And apologies profusely if any: Words, names, places, Characters, which may be less pleasing to the heart of the Reader.
There are several Names and Places that we disguise in order to maintain privacy. Please do not copy this story without the author's knowledge. Thank You
WARNING
The scene in the story is entirely based on a true story.
In the story there are photos that may be quite scary.
For those of you who are less brave are expected not to read it at night or alone.
True Story's
Title: The Abandoned House.
Genre: Horror
Status: On Going
Author: msdella
Writing Date: 08/2018
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Synopsis
This story is based on real events experienced by four young people from Bogor, West Java, especially Deni.
The incident began when Yudi bought an old Dutch heritage house that he wanted to transform into a luxury four-story building.
But as the development goes on, strange events are often experienced by Deni and three other friends. Arif, Ardan and Alvien are given similar assignments from Yudi to oversee the construction process of the old house.
Interaction of the existence of the creature does not seem to start popping up as the construction of the house, the sounds of heartbreaking, until the appearance of a creepy figure so thick felt for anyone who spent the night in the big building.
Countless workers have resigned, caused by the mystical thing that always haunts them. Then will Deni and his three friends be able to survive the situation that continues to terrorize him?
Is there a dark story hidden behind all these mysterious events?
Follow the story in the Abandoned House. And make sure you're brave enough to read it..
Character Introduction
Here is the introduction of Cast in the story played directly by people who are strongly involved in the events of the Abandoned House, and they are also the speakers of the Author. Especially Deni.
We open this story by introducing my friend Deni. The main character in this story who most often get interference from the astral creatures of the inhabitants of the old house.
Name: Deni S
Age: 25 years.
Height: 172cm.
Occupation: IT Support at an Internet Provider company.
Deni was born in Bogor City, he was the second of four children, but at the age of 8 years he and his family migrated to the Cilebut area of West Java, and settled until now.
At the age of 15 years, maybe precisely after graduating in Junior High School, he decided to continue his education at SMK Negeri located in Bandung City.
But the storyline grew happier when his cousin named Yudi decided to facilitate and pay for all the costs Deni needed when settling in Bandung. Even Yudi to make a house that is so magnificent to be the residence of Deni.
Deni has a good nature especially for time problems, he is very disciplined and diligent. Always focused on his goal, under no circumstances did he ever complain, plus a high sense of confidence and strong optimism, making Deni able to face various kinds of problems that often color his daily life in studying.
Just for the matter of romance he is considered not so good, even though the facilities he uses are so luxurious and luxurious property, but still he can not eliminate the excessive clumsiness that sometimes makes him look stupid if he meets a woman. According to Arif's confession so many women who chased him at that time, how not, go home driving a Honda Jezz car which at that time became the most luxurious car in his era.
More or less like that is a reflection of Deni's life, which is now a beautiful memory as well as the worst for him.
And this photo Arif, which he recently uploaded on his social media account, is known Arif also has one child who is six years old, he said, unlike Deni who is still single until this story is published.
Name: Arif.
Age: 25 Years.
Occupation: Kariawan Bank.
Place of birth: Banjarmasin.
Okay, just get on with it.
Arif is Deni's closest cousin, he is the son of my Mother's Brother who is called 'Uwa' and his younger brother Yudi.
Deni and Arif's relationship began to be familiar when Yudi often took them on vacation together in every school holiday arrived, when they were still sitting in Junior High even though not one college.
And more familiar when Arif transferred to Bandung to continue his school in the same college with Deni.
The nature of Arif who seemed spoiled, and always considered down every problem he faced made it difficult to adapt to his new environment. Arif does not have a strong stance, and a passion for getting better. All of that is seen from his school history that often failed at various universities in Bogor.
But Arif's hijrah in the city of Bandung does not make it more independent, it actually makes it more free to laze. He always solves problems just by giving money, without bothering to think. Although that way sometimes even drags him in things that are much more complicated.
Arif is more popular in school than Deni, so he was nicknamed the Boy Scout because of the nature of his royal to anyone close to him. For the problem of romance Arif far excessive, countless how many women have ever become the idol of his heart. Perhaps all due to his selfish and stubborn character, who always felt the most right even though he was wrong.
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And this is Ardan holding his first child.he lives in Gg. Chainlet. Bogors. His house was not far from Arif's. There is not much information about Ardan because Deni does not have his phone number.
Name: Ardan.
Age: 25 Years.
Height: 160cm.
Occupation: None (does not know what job he is doing now)
Place of birth: Bogor.
Ardan is said to still have a distant sibling bond with Deni and Arif, bound by the Grandmother who is the sister of Grandma Arif and Deni.
Ardan and Deni have been familiar since he sat on the bench of Primary School together, namely at Sinang Rasa Elementary School which is not so far from Ardan's house and Deni's residence while living in Gg Chain.
Ardan has a nature that tends to be jovial and high solidarity, making it so easy to get along with people around him. He looks more simple without much determining with whom he should be friendly. Although sometimes he becomes the most ignorant and annoying friend. But what I like about him is that, a mature and wise way of thinking, it is seen when Ardan responds well to all his problems.
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And the last Alvien, this is a photo of him that he soon sent to Deni. Alvien already has a child.
Name: Alvien
Age: 25 years
Occupation: Chef.
He was born in Bandung since childhood he lived in Gg. Bogor chain. quite far with the house of Arif and Ardan.
Deni had no childhood with Alvien, he was more familiar with Ardan who later introduced him to Deni and Arif. Here are the characteristics of him that Deni described.
Alvien is stubborn and too confident, his daily life is too mingled with friends who bring him to black association. Even so, he is the friend who most appreciates and upholds the sickle of friendship, as well as Ardan who has high solidarity. Even Deni and Ardan had lived in Alvien's house for about three months.
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Maybe it is enough for the introduction of his character, hopefully can further complement this search. And sorry if there is no photo of Yudi and the short description. Because when Deni left the Lodge house until this moment, he had never met Yudi again.