Abandoned House (True Story)
True Story - Testing Mental Part 3

Hearing what Mahyong told me I just fell silent with a million question marks.

Maybe all of these events are related. Thought I floated on Grandpa and Grandma who owned this house before.

But I can't just speculate, because it's not necessarily what I'm going through that's actually happening.

"Well what happens after Ayu's house burns down?" my question is, the more curious about Ayu's story.

"After the incident the Ayu family disappeared out of nowhere, Ayu's men were buried far from this village, however, Ayu's spirit always haunts whenever the citizens pass right in front of his house, it all makes the village very uncomfortable" Mahyong added.

"What does this have to do with the house?" my many.

"Nothing, is it! It's so far here and here" Mahyong stared at the ceiling rubbing his chin, trying to remember something, "Oya ... But I don't know for sure, according to the people. Siti's son's body was never found. Either buried where."

I gasped, for a moment this body felt so heavy and cold, "I myself buried the child ...."

"Of ... Den ... Why, lu?" Corporal rubbed my back, when he found out he almost threw up.

"Udah, please! Don't talk about the rich anymore! Some of us come here for fun, not for horror stories," Jainal said, beginning to feel uneasy about our conversation.

"Gue is okay ... Maybe it's in the wind" I said.

"Yes make me say, no need for strange stories ... But this Father wants to know," Mahyong replied pointing to me.

"Well, here play a game against me" replied Arif.

Jainal, Kopral and Mahyong accept Arif's invitation to play the game together. But not with me.

For some reason, my heart felt sliced when I heard the story of Siti and her Son. A strong curiosity was so raging within me.

Time continued to spread, opening the veil of the night increasingly fell in silence. The silence created left only a dark space full of doubt. The singing of insects increasingly accompany the wind that blows medium.

Arif, Jainal, Corporal and Mahyong were all engrossed in playing the game, but it wasn't too long. We were distracted by a very strange voice.

Dduugg ...

"Ssseeett," The Corporal's arms stretched, making us simultaneously mute—improve the sense of hearing.

Dddduugg ...

Saru's voice now sounded very clear. The sound was like a blunt object that was struck on the wall of the room.

"Well, you hear me?" continue, Corporal.

"Clearly! I think someone took a wall in the next room, huh!" Reply Arif whispered.

I was aghast and stood up, "Awas maling, nih!" Hearing that simultaneously everyone went to the bench.

"Sseett's. Let's check!" whisky Janial.

"Is there a room next door, Rif?" ask Mahyong.

"There's only building materials there! There was no one else" replied Arif.

"Yes! Afraid turning!" I whispered, then walked, skidding, followed by Arif and the others.

We all got out of the room, and began to slowly walk towards the door of room number two, which was tightly closed.

"Lu, Iah! Go first!" Mahyong swapped positions with Arif.

"Ssssttt, slow down" whispered Arif who was leading in front of us.

"Den—" Janinal showed me a block lying under the table, "That's, take it!"

I took the block, and took it. It may not be too big, but it's enough just to keep watch.

"Ready? I open it, right?" whispered Arif, with fingers grasping the doorknob and the shoulder side attached to the door body.

"One, two, three!"

Bruuaa!!!

Arif opened the room door violently to make it wide open. The flashlight Jainal held simultaneously illuminated every corner of the pitch-black room.

We looked at each other, when we saw the whole room that just looked like building materials, with no one in here.

Even this room there is only one dead window, which is above the wall—not easy to reach and open it.

This room was so polluted by the very thick dust, inside there were only buckets of worker tools and the Sement pile filled the left corner of the room.

It is impossible for even a mouse to enter this enclosed space, and again the sound was in the middle of the wall adjacent to our room.

"That window is far away, it can't be opened, can it?" jainal said, while highlighting a window with a flashlight.

"No! That's a dead window" Arif said.

"Ah, maybe just a rat," I said, not wanting to raise this problem. Although I actually feel if the sound is caused by something invisible.

"Yes, unplug, dah," said Corporal.

We closed the door and returned to the first room. But, as soon as I turned away from the lips of the door, we again heard the same knocking sound but with a larger tone.

Bleddduugg!!

Me and the others gasped, looking quickly at the door of the room we had just closed.

"Well! ... Not right, here!" gusar Mahjong's.

"Wrong again?" I said, the one called by Arif and the others.

We agreed to go back to the room and find out the cause of the sound.

"The cave's open, huh?" corporal said, get ready at the door.

"Hold it!" my sergeant, pull Corporal's shoulder. "Wait for the sound to come out again!" Me and the others were silent, waiting at the door of the room.

But it's weird. The sound was heard again but this time it was clearly different.

Kkkkrrrreeet!!!

The sound of nails scratching the door made us aghast, retreating a few steps away from the door.

"ah! Open it!" pekik Jainal, pushed the door.

Gubraa!!

My breath began to pant, peering hastily into all directions. No doubt the same sight I found. Inside the room was so quiet, it looked calm and quiet. We did not even see a single mouse passing by in the room.

Not until here, we are curious and then look to all corners of the room, until even the smallest gaps do not escape our search.

"Duh! This is the light room's dead!" gusar Arif, turn down the light switch.

"Byeah! It's alive, huh?" my exposition.

"Udah! Boro-boro rats, cockroaches are not here" Mahyong said, opening several buckets lying on the floor.

"Oi! His voice was clear from behind this door, you know!" timpal Jainal, he examined the entire body of the door with a flashlight. "But weird! There are no berets!"

I'm interested in checking it out, "Try ..." My eyebrows almost fused together, as I stared at the door from top to bottom. "The voice is so clear, time is not a trace!"

We huddled behind the door of room number two, researching a door that still seemed smooth, without any visible strokes.

"Gue said, what?" Mahyong turned around and stepped out of the room, "there must be something wrong with this!"

"Yes! Out!" pekik Jainal's.

Our futile search stopped, not a single rat was trapped in this room. And that door, it really makes me even more convinced, if the culprit is neither animal nor human.

"Rat sounds? It can't be that way! Even if the sound is from a mouse ... What's that rat?" jainal said, still looking at the gaps in the stack of Sement.

"Continue?" corporal, staring at us one by one.

I raise my shoulders faintly, "Come on ...."

"Main Games again, huh? Let this door open ... If the rat he must have come out on his own," said Arif, and passed to the first room. Followed by me and the others.

"Often not, anyway, like gini?" mahyong said, on the way to the first room.

"No, this time," I commented.

"Gue mending sleeping, deh. It's two o'clock this morning, Wa," Jainal said, laying her body on the carpet.

"Cemen, great! Gadang, come!" lance Corporal, pat Jainal's thighs asleep on his stomach.

"Bodo very!" the answer, quickly.

"Oi! ... You're sleeping too, Den?" I lowered my lips and nodded faintly.

We slept lined up on the velvet carpet in this doorless room. Kurada is wide enough to accommodate five people inside here.

I lay down on the left side, staring at the ceiling with uncertain doubts.

Ghosts are not just on TV ... Is it possible if it happens in the real world?

I was very curious about the sound of the knock we had just experienced and decided to try something ridiculous that couldn't possibly happen.

I glanced at the friends, it seems that they have been sleeping soundly. What about cemen! He himself pats! I got out of bed, crawled slowly through the rows of bodies— towards the wall that separates this room and room number two.

Dugc ... Dugc ...

I knocked on the wall with my arm ... But there's no answer.

... There's still no answer.

I smiled faintly despite the intense anxiety pressing within me, What a foolish action!!

I also returned to nest in my place, with my eyes closed I began to shut.

Daaaaarrrrrs! ...

The door slings blared loudly, breaking the silence. I was flabbergasted to the point of sitting with extravagant breath.

My heartbeat felt dead for a moment, before finally pounding quickly. I turned to Arif and the others who were still fast asleep.

Not over yet my body was shaken by the knocking of the door. I was again confronted by a black shadow that crossed from the direction of the kitchen to pass in front of this room— was addressed to the main door.

The shadow is flat, not much different from the shadow in general, only that the shadow is not caused by the light factor. Because there are no lights that highlight from the kitchen to the front of the house—must create an elongated shadow.

These eyes were fixed on the shadow that was before me, until I realized, if anything was staring at me, from the right corner of the door. I don't want to look at that figure, because this body already feels so hot.

But that doesn't mean I don't see it, even though I don't look at it, but I'm sure it's a head with very long hair.

Not to mention, the black shadow that I looked at, was now starting to stick out into a long dull hair—a fine, rusty wire.

Let alone to speak, to swallow I cannot, I want to feel like I yell or pull Jainal's arm right on my right side, but this body seems numb. Unable to move even a little.

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Bused, this is a hot boy, Rif?

Beh, pain him ...

He also slept in a chair ...

Oi ... Den, Fig. Wake up, it's noon!

Feeling a strong pounding on the body, I opened my eyes slowly, seeing my friends gathered waiting for me to wake up.

I grabbed my hair, as intense pain swept through my head.  My whole body felt sore, as if this backbone was smashed into pieces.

"Why sleep in a chair? Is the bed still a relief?" cecar Janial's. I raised my chin, shifted the lyrics to the room.

I sighed deeply, shaking faintly. Twice in one night I experienced something similar. Where my body moves on its own.

Arif's fingers stick to my forehead, "Aer cooker in your head, this mateng." I glanced weakly at Arif.

"Russia ... Still sick is you ledekin" Jainal said.

"It's hot doang ... Yeah, no, Den?"

"Take a doctor, Rif," Janial added.

"Yes, have your face washed there, we go to the doctor, deh," said Arif, membatah my body rose from sitting.

My steps are not because, my body feels very heavy. Even I lost my balance, while trying to stand—lucky Arif held my body swiftly.

"Eh ... Almost! ... I'll help you!" Arif helped me walk until I got to the bathroom door.

"From here I can be alone, Rif," I said, with a flat face.

"Yes, hurry up, get some lunch!"

I rushed into the toilet to wash my face, but when I was about to take a dipper on the Bathtub.

I flinched until my body hit the wall on the left side. This is impossible! I slowly stuck my head over the bath.

I was stunned when I saw my face reflected on the water. I don't know why the reflection was actually in the form of a woman, with pale white skin.

Byuuaarrr....

I hit the puddle of water in front of me, causing Arif to react.

It's hallucination ... Yep! just my hallucinations.

With my breath still irregular, I tried again. But still the reflection of my face back to resemble a woman. her skin is so white, her face looks small by a chin that almost tapered. Long, bangy hair, almost covering the eyebrows, but not with his narrowed eyes. The curvature of his nose swung, seemingly beaming adorning his thin lips.

I kept looking at the reflection of my face full of big question marks. Sometimes I look back to make sure there was no one else but me.

Okay, this is just a hallucination ... My condition is unstable, and again there will be no ghosts in the morning! I'd better check on my health soon.

For a while I looked at the reflection of my face, although not creepy but still make this heart beat fast. It's strange!

Krreeett...

I walked towards the living room, after coming out of the toilet, to get ready.

"Is everything ready?" tanya Arif leaned against the doorpost, "no one is left behind. Just in case you are afraid not to stay here again," added Arif, reflecting thick smoke from the cigarette.

My body came to a halt for a moment, turning quickly towards Arif who was behind me, "What do you mean! Not coming back here again?" gusarku, who involuntarily grabbed Arif's collar very tightly.

"Russia ... " Arif's face is pale, and looks confused, "Lu why ...." Arif ripped my shoulder.

The indistinct anger faded. My eyes widened, and asked in my heart, What happened to me! I'm fully aware, but why can't I control myself so well.

I glanced at Arif's legs that had half-toed, simultaneously taking off my grip.

"Den?"

I just lowered my head with a blank look, in uncertainty I tried to regulate the speed of my breathing that blew quickly.

What's wrong with me? I can't control my anger? I almost hurt, Arif ... Best brother!

"I'm sorry, Rif! I really don't feel good today." I said in a flat tone.

"Slow to Den ... Ready yet?" I nodded faintly.

Brunm ... Brums...

The workers who started arriving got off the mini bus. I don't know any of their faces, still very foreign to me. Maybe they are meant by bang Yudi.

But something distracts me, a man with a stocky body complete with a striped green uniform. Getting off the motor vehicle.

"Ngawal, nih ..," cried Arif.

"Eh ... There, Arif, Deni," said mang Usman, stepping quickly toward us who were standing on the front porch.

"Where are you going?" continued Usman, after we kissed his arm. "The worse! Mama's coming home?"

"It's really hot since this morning, this is also going to the doctor," Arif replied.

"Yeah ... Pantes like this pale kid." Mang Usman was like surprised when he put the palm of his arm on my forehead, "Gusti ... Hot very ... Yeah, it's a spit, Rif. Take it to the doctor ... Here, in the T-junction Ciomas exist," added Mang Usman, showing the way.

"Yes Mang, you can go through that."

"Yes, it'll be through Yoniv's exit."

I just fell silent, my eyes were so unfocused. Even this floor felt swung.

"Yes already Mang yes, Arif nganter first," replied Arif, shaking hands.

"Be careful, Rif ... Den."

We also began to leave the Lodge House. walked to Ciomas to check on my condition that was already helpless.

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