
Assalammualaikum guys, may always be healthy huh, aamiin. I have a new story inpo that I put in a free reading place that is in F I Z Z O.
the title is On the Threshold of Longing, can find the title and find my name there or DM to my Instagram @megadischa.
Here's Blurb and Chapter 1.
"It is not because I am not beautiful, stupid and poor. But, your mother's standards alone are too high to choose a daughter-in-law. These two years I've been fighting to break through the walls of your Mammu's heart, Mas. But it also does not produce results. I have patience until it feels like I am hard to survive. How now? Would you choose?"
And when the husband who is afraid of being poor because he will be deposed of the family's big name and treasure, he will not also want to choose between himself and the Mother-in-law.
Then, Lintang moves quickly to end suffering. He decided to run away with one of his twins. And after he was able to breathe the air off, his regret appeared accompanied by the irresponsibility of the husband who made his life often befriended by problems.
"I should be able to be patient, not to run away just leaving, Miana and Mas Lingga," he said with tears as he stroked Moana's hair. He remembered his other twin and the husband who was still desperately looking and eager to avenge his pain.
Can his longing end with the word peace?
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Moana Aglaya, a four-year-old girl who had been put into the kindergarten, for fifteen minutes cast her eyes out onto the street from inside the school gate, waiting for the Mother to pick her up who had been a manyun since she returned to be the last occupant except the teachers.
"Please say no, yapat. Eat bica teyat agih pick me up." Moana chimes sadly, looking at her bangs already out of the edge of the hijab. With a white-white uniform that looks great because his body is so tiny. Moana sat on a swing attached to the big tree of the school garden to remain patiently waiting. With a backpack with caricatures of dora and her monkey, she yawned many times to forget about sleepiness. Today there was a sports lesson, Momo felt very tired.
When leaning weak because of fatigue and drowsiness increasingly strafe himself, he said, moana's eyeballs bought when she saw a young boy about the same age as her getting off in a luxury car approaching a cakwe merchant just in front of her school gate.
"Kayak penah liyat, yeah. In manah yah." then the branch unfolded as he held his own two cheeks.
"Am I'm cool?" Even the boy out there who was waiting on the side of the cart accidentally saw Moana inside the school garden, the brown-haired boy's neck was twitching to highlight it. As if linking confused eyebrows, is he looking in the mirror?
"Brothers, yes, Tires." The boy who looked a lot like Moana was quickly gone after the cakwe had been lined up in a plastic wrap, getting into a black sports car.
"Have you had breakfast yet, still hungry?" ask the father who switched from a macbook in his lap to Miana.
Miana who really likes the roadside cakwe brothers asked her father's driver to pull over the car so he could buy it, smiling sweetly. "If camah cakweh I'm ndak bica nolak, Dad." Defend himself.
"Can ask for help to make the same, Mother." the name of Mother Lingga means Miana who just married four months ago and is now pregnant two months.
"Aban-Aban's homemade meal is kayak gituh, Well," he replied as he chewed a cakwe mixed with sambal sauce.
"This once, yes. Not again tomorrow. You're afraid you'll get a stomachache." Lingga turned to look at Herman from behind the rearview in. The driver who was always loyal from the era of Lingga was not married as if he knew that he was getting a mandate.
"Good, sir." It means Lingga, so that Herman no longer agree if Miana asks herself to stop the car like now just want to snack on the side of the road. Because Lingga knows he cannot be hard on Miana who is often called Mimi.
When the car moved again, while enjoying the cakwe, his eyes continued to be fixed on the boy who looked like he was stepping closer to the gate, to pay attention to the luxury car that Miana was riding.
"So the bullfighter wears a shady hood." Mimi looks at Momo who seems to want to know herself and is amazed at a good car.
"Try Mommy buy ajah car, ndak use a transparent motor. If you're gonna try it again, I'm not gonna bury it." Momo's eyes never receded to notice the car that began to crawl away.
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There was a big event there, because the owner of the Factory was now selling it to the new owner who would introduce himself in today. As the head nurse or clinic in charge, Lintang should be on standby to prepare themselves. But, because things had to pick up Momo and now the child chose to go home first to make Lintang become a dag dig dug not calm.
"And Mother said, Mo. Don't you dare go home alone!" The latitude rattled furiously while continuing down the road to the house to the shadow of Momo who began to grow bigger more felt very chatty and curious.ย
Accompanied by the fear of Momo being kidnapped by bad people, Lintang decides to come late to the clinic. Let him get into trouble, the important thing is that his son meets first. Because Momo has never ridden angkot, because the distance from school children to home is quite far.
"If such a walk must still be around here right? Oh, my God, Mo. You are really naughty, you do not understand! Anyway if Mother has not picked up, yes, do not dare to go home first. Just be careful when you meet. Mother pinch you!" and the fact is that when they will meet, as usual Momo who is always disappointed will be more fierce than her mother.
Continue to pass the second motorbike that he bought from the salary pool from working at the Clinic for approximately three years before he ran away from the house of in-laws, who have now entered the gate of the village where they live is a contract of three plots. And at all he did not find Momo's footsteps on the way.
"Have you got home, huh? I also picked him up a little late. Could Momo have arrived? But the hell did he walk that far?" instantly, the Latitude heart that seemed to have been rumbling since then began to normal because when turning off the roar of the motorbike in front of the rented, he saw the door was open and there was a sound of television wronged.
"O Allah is Thankful. It turns out my son has come home." quickly get off the bike to cuddle Momo. As usual, he will apologize to the boy for coming back late.
"Assalammualaikum his love, Mother ..." Right? If Lintang will not have the heart to be angry let alone want to pinch like his intention when looking for Momo.
"Waakumcallam," replied Momo flat who was lying on the carpet with a hijab was opened but the uniform was not yet. There was a fan lit up and spitting a fresh breeze towards him.
"Why go home alone, son? Mother is worried. Afraid you're okay." Latitude kissed Momo's cheek that was padlocked.ย
"I'm lazy cama, Mother. Lying telus." today Lintang had promised to pick up Momo on time but unfortunately he returned unable to keep his words.
"In the Factory again
"What agih? Yapat ajah telus." Momo, who was upset but looked cute and adorable, made Lintang curl up and the boy tilted his lips lazily.
"There's gonna be a new boss in the factory, son. So Mother must come to prepare everything. Does Momo want Mommy fired?"
"Yes, nothing. Kan Kata Om Adi also Mommy is better ndak ucah kelja. Bial Om aja kelja." there is one Factory manager who happens to be a widower but does not have children. In recent years it has been struggling to get close to Lintang to be made a wife.ย
If Lintang is still reminded of the past that makes it hesitant to tread the path of a new romance, it seems Momo is more interested in Adi. Momo feels Adi can meet her needs as a child who needs the caress of a Father who Momo knows that her biological father is dead.
"Pretty mom, yes, same, Om Adi?"
Momo nodded. "Come don, Bun. Get married, Om. Bial we moved his house, ndak in the sniffles transparent. Pineapple." in the nurse's clothes that were still perched covered the skin of the body, Latang took a long breath. If you see Momo like this, the guilt that will indeed be forever present, re-emerges to the surface of the heart.
He was reminded of the man who until this moment is still a husband, has not divorced him, even still as strong as possible to find. Even the twin Momo, who is very Lintang misses.
"Patience, yes, son." If only Latitude did not obey his ego. Maybe until this moment he did not have to bother to make a living and make Moana live in consciousness because the child is actually able to live in luxury.
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