Last Page Story of Shabira

Last Page Story of Shabira
01. Drowned


"Finally done too!"


Livia Ananta smiled proudly as she stretched her hand muscles. Now it has been a few minutes since he updated a new chapter on an online novel platform that has raised his pen name. Livia is a famous novelist. There are quite a lot of works that he has created and all of them are liked by the readers. No exception to the last work he just finished.


Livia is very good at making stories with satisfying endings, but not this time. The novel he titled Happy Ending is very inversely proportional to the end of the story he made. On the way to the end of the story, Livia had quite a lot of protests from the readers. It was all because the storyline he made this time was so sad for the main character he named Shabira Lawrence.


Capitalizing on his arrogant and tough nature, Livia never cared about the meaning of the readers and continued the story according to the previous plot. At its peak, Livia has completed the last page of her novel with a sad ending for the main character. Shabira Lawrence decides to commit suicide because she can no longer live her life in search of a glimmer of happiness. And in the end, Happy Ending's story now ends with Sad Ending.


Twenty minutes passed, Livia who was waiting for the comments of the readers was not at all surprised to see the first comment that appeared on his laptop screen. As he had expected before, his loyal readers would be very disappointed to find the main character who chose to end his life instead of defending himself in front of everyone.


"This time I'm so disappointed in your story, I hope you feel what Shabira feels!" Livia read the first comment with a petty face. "Where is it possible? I'm not as stupid and weak as Shabira!" buy over.


For a moment Livia could still casually read the negative comments of her readers. However, the longer the more negative comments appear on the screen of his laptop. Livia who began to be lured finally joined nagging endlessly.


"Do you think it makes the story easy? Just keep playing, respecting the work of others. If you can't skip it, don't read it!"


Livia nagged incoherently, but did not respond to those negative comments either. Because actually Livia is quite aware that it is indeed her fault, the readers will not comment negatively if the story she makes is in accordance with the wishes of the readers. And Livia was well aware of that, after a long time struggling in the field of authorship.


From inside the inn, a girl was seen walking towards Livia who was still sitting in her place. The girl smiled wryly as she shook her head, looking at the behavior of her friend who was nagging in front of the laptop.


"Vy, lo why? Dapet blasphemy again?"


Livia shifted her gaze, looking at the girl who was now sitting before her. Kinan Arista, he was a friend of Livia since sitting in high school until now, now they are studying at the same university but with different majors.


"Biasalah, I've guessed from the beginning if they will protest the same story!" answer Livia casually. "But I'm the same comment pedes them, read the comments already like eating chili carolina reaper one basin tau no!" his gerrick.


"What do they comment on?" ask Kinan curiously.


"My nyukahin, they want me to be able to understand what Shabira rasain. Yes where possible, Bokap same Nyokap I really love the same me. Different from Shabira, our nature is far away again!" livia explained at length.


Kinan laughed at the nagging of his best friend. "Udah already! Instead of you dizzy thinking of their comments, mending us diving yuk. The others are waiting on the ship, today we go south! It's shallower there he said, but be careful!" said Kinan while inviting.


"Seriously? Why not say from earlier, I can't wait to swim with the fish again know!"


Livia excitedly closed her laptop, this is what she had been waiting for since yesterday. As always, the semester break will definitely have time that he and his friends use for sightseeing. Looking for underwater tourist destinations that are their target.


"Yes, get ready!" kinan.


Livia immediately tidied up her laptop, then ran away leaving Kinan alone. Not waiting long, Livia had returned with a long swimsuit covered by a long shirt with a looser and thinner size.


"Udah ready, go hunt!"


Livia pulls Kinan's hand, inviting him to walk quickly towards the ship. The girl was already very impatient to enjoy the underwater scenery, at least to forget for a moment her annoyance at those scathing comments.


Fifteen minutes passed, now the ship was in the intended area. While on the way, they had a briefing for a moment, so that there are no obstacles during the dive later. Now everyone who wants to go diving has used the full equipment, as well as Livia.


"Lo seriously Vy, don't want to use aqualung?" ask Kinan while aligning next to Livia who is getting ready.


Yes, for the dive this time Livia did not want to go too far. That's why he didn't want to use an oxygen aid for the dive this time. Somehow his mood suddenly changed after being on the ship, he again remembered the spicy comments from the reading. He is usually tired of it all.


"Three meters also by Vy, your height is only one hundred and sixty-five meters!" kinan.


Livia stared at Kinan from top to bottom, the girl was already wearing clothes and complete equipment for diving this time. But that was not what made him look at Kinan with a trivial look, but rather his height. "I'm taller than you!" his lips.


"Yes, I'm told you even saw you!" furious Kinan. Livia just chuckled.


"Okay guys, please pay attention for a moment! Before the afternoon is getting better, we should start now. I just want to remind you, take care of yourself. Do not do anything dangerous to damage the marine ecosystem" said a tour guide to all visitors. "Yes, have a good time then, we will monitor the six of you from the boat" he continued.


Everyone was so enthusiastic, they were already impatient to enjoy the underwater beauty there. One by one they begin to disembark from the ship, including Livia and Kinan. With a swimming aid in the form of glasses and snorkel, Livia immediately plunged into the water. Followed by Kinan and other friends.


Livia swims casually enjoying the underwater scenery, seeing a lot of small fish swimming around there. Coral reefs and other marine animals side by side, Livia felt very happy to be able to swim freely around there. While his friends began to split up looking for beauty in other places, including Kinan who did want to dive deeper into the south.


After a long time enjoying the view. Livia, who had been swimming on the surface of the sea, now decided to swim further down. The depth in place is now already about three meters, Livia is eager to see the beautiful coral reefs from a closer distance. He thought it would be so much fun.


And sure enough, with capital to hold her breath, Livia can now enjoy the beauty of the small fish that hide behind the coral reefs. Not only that, there are many sea anemones that sway to and fro as a hideout for cute little nemo fish. Livia smiled in silence, her hands outstretched to touch the fish.


Long enough underwater, Livia, who was running out of oxygen, slowly swam up to take a breath. But who would have thought, suddenly a big wave hit him who had just emerged from the water. Livia who had not had time to take a breath back into the water.


Strange, why is it suddenly this big?


Livia who just appeared to the surface immediately took a lot of breath, but again a big wave hit him. No, this time the waves were much bigger than before. Even the water below felt the waves. Livia was so surprised when she was swept away by the waves, her body was carried away by the current until it went back into the water and hit the reef quite hard down there.


Livia's consciousness was still there, the girl stared up. Now that he was at a depth of three meters, the huge wave was still up there. His body even bobbed like animals around there, but strangely Livia was still in her place. The girl closed her eyes when she felt pain in some parts of her body due to the impact earlier, especially on one of her legs.


Not wanting to run out of breath, Livia tried again to swim upwards. However, one of his legs that was painful, it turned out to be stuck between the rocks that seemed quite hard. Livia tries to stay calm, then moves her legs to get away from there. But that only made her legs more painful.


Not losing her mind, Livia tries to free her legs using her hands. Unfortunately the rocks were so hard that he was unable to release his legs. Livia started to panic realizing that. The girl looked back and forth looking for a hard object like a rock around there. After meeting, he immediately took it and hit it on the rock to break.


Livia still keeps hitting him. But unfortunately, all his efforts did not produce results. Livia couldn't take off her legs that were still wedged by the coral reef. Panicking, Livia starts to get scared. He didn't want to die silly in that place. The oxygen supply in her body was depleting, Livia began to be unable to hold her breath anymore. The girl forgot, if the panic would only reduce the supply of oxygen in her body.


The girl rebelled in the water, but it made her legs hurt even more. It's been a while in the water, the oxygen supply really stayed a little. Livia looked up, there was no one around. He wanted to scream for help, but all that was impossible to bear fruit.


Slowly closing her eyes, she began to lose consciousness. Her body sagged and slowly sank, Livia was no longer able to hold her breath. The girl was forced to surrender by circumstances that did not side with her.


Mah Mah, I'm sorry. Not because I didn't want to fight, but this circumstance forced me to give up!


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