River Suburbs Village

River Suburbs Village
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Sorry friends regulation noveltoon changed for the better so I wrote again.This story wants me to finish huh? Ntar I make a fun story again.and hopefully the reader is not bored waiting for my story because I tried not long update her.sorry long hiatus because I was busy working.search other fun...now I have two days off, so write again.


The old granny started chasing them and it turned out that the chase had managed to chase the five of them.


"Hey, where are you going?" there's no other way for you than to be my followers forever"


"It's my nature, so you all can't possibly get out of this world before I open the veil of my nature and your nature" said the old grandmother, looking cynically at Subhan, father's mother Subhan and Sarto.


Jin Zaenal, who was there at the time, tried to prevent his grandmother from attacking Subhan and his family


"Sir, let's go" Let them go" Grandma's goals are many, why pursue them again?" jin Zaenal said while pulling his grandmother's hand.


The old granny glanced at the jin zaenal and said


"You don't have to interfere"


"Go son" I'll lock you up for a while" said the grumpy old man.


The one-eyed old grandmother immediately threw the body of the zaenal jinn and went away from Subhan and his family. Meanwhile, Subhan and Sarto try to leave by holding Subhan's parents who are slightly weak.


"Hey, where are you going to run?"


"Ha ha ha" the old granny's laughter from one's eyes grew louder and gave Subhan the creeps.


It looks like a worn-out boat is on the riverbank where Subhan first washed up on the island.


"Subhan. Sarto's sweat began to trickle down his body.


"Yes uncle", replied Subhan trying to hold his mother's hand.


It was seen that the power of the old grandmother's eyes began to weaken when she reached the riverbank.


"Well, why is the old grandma silent?" can't catch up to us after we're on the boat?" ask Suhan in astonishment.


"Let's go, son, let's get out of this place" my wife's son was waiting at home" Sarto told Subhan.


Sarto's breathing is getting heavier because his energy began to weaken since stranded in a ghost village inhabited by old grandmother's eyes one.


They only drank water during the shipwreck in the village, including Subhan and Subhan's parents.


Even so, the four of them believe in the magic, and that is what makes them excited to go home.


From a distance, the four of them saw one-eyed old grandmother trying to go down to the river but finally left again from the river. His feet look like they're on fire.


"Subhan, look at old granny one eye" There are many secret things in this river" The gentle creature like the old granny can't get through this river" What's the matter?" ask Sarto to Subhan.


"Don't know sir" There seems to be something strange about the water in this river" Just a moment?" I want to take water from this river" Subhan said as he put his hand into the haunted river


Subhan's hand began to enter and it felt a very cold air penetrated into Subhan's bone


"Uncle, the river water here feels like ice only" Subhan told Sarto


"Where?" try to feel the water" said Sarto as he placed his hand on the river.


"Hem, it's cold" Sarto replied to Subhan.


Meanwhile, in the place of the old grandmother one eye, the old grandmother with a face full of lethargy returned to her residence with a state of injured body. His wrinkled face began to look more and more wrinkled. His energy was drained by the cold of the river water.