Eye Analysis
Disadvantages of Eye Analysis
In addition to thanking you, the author also wants to write all the shortcomings of the Analysis Eye Work that the author has made.
Maybe you also already know where the flaws are and maybe some stop reading because of this deficiency.
There are so many shortcomings in the Eye Analysis Work and apologize if the author can not write all his shortcomings.
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A. Story
Analysis Eye story has the core of the main character, Lein Sanzio who will grow stronger with his F rank ability.
However, the author did not set Lein's goals at the beginning of the story that made some readers feel vain to read because Lein wanted to get stronger but not clear for what.
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B. Stories of the Past
Lein is a teenager who has a slightly grim past where she was dumped by her parents at the age of four.
She was adopted by her grandparents but they also died in an accident when Lein was ten.
The author does not tell the story of Lein's past in detail so that the readers understand and instead tell it briefly.
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C. Characters
Here the author will write the shortcomings of the characters in the Eye Analysis Work.
Lein: Author actually wants to make Lein a cheerful child even though the life situation is complicated but the author can not maximize it.
Octiorb: Author wants him to help Lein because he is a spirit that exists along with Analysis Eye but Octiorb only gives a few suggestions.
Anna : Author wants to make Anna one of the Heroine but because she is from an influential family, the author breaks down and instead dates John but explained in detail.
Liza: Liza's past has been briefly explained but the author does not explain how the bandits kidnapped Liza with the help of artifacts.
Thogal: A forging Dwarf who wants to write as a great Dwarf but only appears in a few chapters.
Hido: Author made her Lein's teacher but she doesn't teach much and doesn't look like Lein's teacher.
Linda: Will author one Heroine but only appears in a few chapters and become Heroine in the last chapter.
Enya: Not as a Heroine but as Lein's best friend, but ultimately Enya has little effect on Lein.
Jonas: The author wants to make Lein's shield, but Lein is too strong so he does not need any protection and this character becomes less useful.
John: Lein's best friend is not very useful in this story because his job is only to provide poison to Lein alone.
Brynn: The University president whose abilities are shown only a little and one of Heroine Lein at the end of which their previous relationship is not very clear.
Althea: Lein's mother is cunning but does not look crafty because the author cannot maximize the nature of her character and ends up ordinary.
Frederic: Lein's evil father but the author does not show how evil Frederic is and he only appears a few chapters to fight with Lein.
Kadin: Lein's unauthor grandfather explains in detail and appears on the sidelines of the chapter and at the end of the chapter while fighting with Brynn and Lein.
Isolda: A dragon but not too feared when the dragon is a creature that is at the top of the food chain.
Abelia: Author created this character to help Isolda but was eventually shown only a little.
Britta: The author created this character to be able to practice a match with Lein because she is a half dragon who has a strong physique and magic.
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D. Items
There were some items that became useless such as the Book of Memoirs, the Staff of Sapience, and other items that the author had slightly forgotten.
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E. Gods and Goddesses
Gods and Goddesses exist but the author does not explain them in detail and in the end only Goddess Ariel appears.
Even the author made a big mistake here for not introducing the God who gave the Eye Analysis to Lein, namely Szem.
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F. World Development
There are 5 main races but the author only tells about humans only. Other than humans, there were also Dwarves that the author had told me a little.
The author also did not explain how the Elf Continent, Demon Continent, Mermaid Region were in detail even the Demon Continent had not yet been author mentioned.
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There are so many shortcomings of this Eye Analysis Work, right? The author is very sorry because this is also the first time the author wrote a story in earnest.
The previous story that stopped in chapter 18 was a story that the author made half-heartedly and not too seriously.
In essence, in this Eye Analysis Work, the author makes too many characters that eventually become useless and unreported.
You can write in the comment field about the flaws of Analysis Eye what you know other than the one above.
If in the previous announcement chapter the author says thank you, then in this announcement chapter the author wants to apologize.
The author is very sorry for the many shortcomings that exist in this Analysis Eye!!!!
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