Not Nackal, Nurul!
Loyuan Nurul (revised)

“Actually I have come to.. make an offer to you,” Nurul said.  Nurul's chin trembled, as did his hand.  But, he tried to make himself as firm as possible as if he was wearing the most covered and thick winter clothes, so courteous.

“You want it, don't you?” nurul said as he waved both hands down to indicate his entire body.  For the first time in Tommy's life, he can't say a word.  Nurul couldn't possibly say what Tommy thought Nurul meant.  This was not the plain village girl he knew.

Upon seeing Tommy speechless, Nurul continued on more nervously.  “I'll give my body to you for free for one night.  Instead, you should promise not to say anything to Mr. Sudarsono or Brian,”.

Nurul took a deep breath, then immediately continued.  “I expect nothing but your promise.  I don't want you to marry me. I just want you to shut up,” Nurul said.

For that reason Nurul willing to do this?  For a moment Tommy actually considered the offer and the intent of everything Nurul said.  She could tear off Nurul's dress and caress every seductive curve of her body.  He could cradle the beautiful chest, open both legs of the level and immerse himself in Nurul's body freely.

After all, Tommy didn't really mean to see Mr. Sudarsono.  It was all just a bluff.  But, if Tommy gives up and accepts Nurul's offer, he will lose the only method to urge Nurul to tell him the truth.  He can't give up.

Nurul volunteered because she was desperate, not because she wanted to sleep in her bed.  Nurul looks shy in his first romance.  Nurul could not stand still with the leaf and his eyes swept through the room as if searching for a monster hiding behind a bookshelf.

“Your plan means so much that you are willing to destroy yourself like this?” ask Tommy.  Nurul gasped when he heard that.  But, it seems that it cannot stop its purpose.  “Yes, the purpose of my disguise is much more honorable than you think and if you end it before.. “.

Anger flashed in Nurul's eyes and soon faded.  “You must trust me.  Many people will be devastated if you talk to Mr. Sudarsono.  I did everything I could to prevent that from happening,” Nurul said.

Nurul raised his hand and took off his hairpin.  He let his long hair fall on his shoulder.  “Whatever you want, Tommy,” Nurul said.

The turmoil of passion made Tommy's knee limp.  The smell of floral perfume seduced him.  As Nurul flicked his long hair, Tommy thought as if he had reached the edge of heaven.

“What kind of man do you think I am?” tommy said in a suffocating voice.

*

Jemari Nurul explores Tommy's trouser-covered body.  She caressed him with certainty which made Tommy pause for a moment as his body became as hard as iron.  While cursing, Tommy grabs Nurul's hand and keeps him away from his body.

Grabbing Nurul's shoulder, Tommy looks for a number of signs of uncertainty in Nurul's eyes, but he does not find them.  A smile slowly adorned Nurul's lips as he wrapped his hands around Tommy's waist.  Then, Nurul ferociously slid his hand down to catch Tommy's ass.  Nurul squeezes it and Tommy nearly explodes at that moment.

“So, are we going to continue?” nurul asked in the soft voice of a lover.

Tommy pulls Nurul's hand into his arms.  He kissed Nurul with all the passion that had formed in him since the first time he saw the girl.  Nurul's gentle response, the way Nurul's body melted and his mouth opened under Tommy's mouth, all of which had seduced Tommy.  There's a kind of possessive cursed excitement and it scares Tommy.

For God's sake.nurul taste, Nurul aroma is so tempting and beguiling.  It will make every man forget himself.  Wildly, Tommy stuck his tongue into Nurul's warm mouth.  He is now almost crazy to unite himself with Nurul.

Nurul's body wriggled like a cat in Tommy's arms.  He could almost imagine Nurul snoring as Nurul extended his arms around Tommy's neck, like a cat.  Nurul immersed his fingers in Tommy's hair to pull Tommy closer.  Then the clock chimed right in the middle of the night, it shocked the two of them.

Removing his mouth from Nurul's mouth, Tommy glimpsed the clock.  Then, the whole room was gloomy.  Tommy doesn't know if he can hold back any longer to make love to Nurul, but this girl deserves better than this room.

“Ayo,” said Tommy while pulling Nurul towards the door.  “Where are we going, Tom?” ask Nurul.  “Ke my bedroom.  I don't want to fuck you on the floor like a bum,’ Tommy said.

Nurul paused for a moment at the door.  “What does this mean that you agree with my offer?  You want to shut up, right?” ask Nurul.

Nurul's words reminded Tommy in a bad way about the reason why Nurul did this.  Tommy looked at Nurul, hoping that he had the desire to reject Nurul and he had no desire at all.

One glance at Nurul's draped hair, her reddish lips, her eyes that were emitting desire, that was enough to make Tommy ignore all doubts.  “Shut your mouth?  I will tie my tongue forever just to have you in my bed tonight,” Tommy said.

Victory was clearly reflected in Nurul's eyes.  Then, he touched Tommy's finger to his mouth, tracing his lip line with sensual movements that made the passion hit Tommy's body.  “I can think of another better use for your tongue,” Nurul said.

Tommy bites Nurul's finger, sucking it until Nurul makes a sound.When Tommy releases that finger, Tommy's body feels louder than ever.  “True.  Follow me and I'll show you how much I can do with my tongue,” Tommy said.

Tommy's bedroom is not what Nurul imagined it to be.  To be sure, in the room there is a large bed, the perfect place to seduce.  Surprisingly there are no obscene paintings, erotic sculptures to arouse one's passion here.  For a man who spent his nights in the arms of seductresses and seductress widows, Tommy's bedroom seemed well-organized and had little furniture.  There was only a dressing table and writing desk accompanying the bed.

“We have arrived,” said Tommy.  Tommy locked the door of his room and his voice echoed loudly in Nurul's ears.  “Ya,” replied Nurul.  Nurul is really here now.  In Tommy's bedroom.  Both with Tommy.

“Let's get all this off.  Can ya?” said Tommy.  Tommy approaches Nurul from behind and pushes her hair aside so she can unzip Nurul's dress.  Nurul felt her dress open, revealing her back little by little to feel the coldness of the air.

Nurul trembled, partly because of the cold, partly because of fear.  When Tommy kissed her mercilessly earlier, Nurul forgot about the many things she wanted to do.  But, realizing Tommy is taking off his dress, he realizes a reality he cannot possibly escape.  Once all this is over, Nurul will be completely destroyed.