Bella's Script
Mas, go home
At about 9pm Devan arrived at the hospital. He looks tired after a day of activity outside. Bella greeted him as the door opened.
“Assalamu ‘alaikum..”
“Wa’alaikum greetings.”.
Bella smiled happily to welcome her husband. He immediately approached, yapping Devan's softly kissed hand. Devan replies with a gentle swipe at Bella's head and then kisses the top of her head for a while.
His tiredness seemed to pay off when he saw Bella in front of him.
“Where was the meeting, smoothly?” Bella was curious about the meeting Devan led and walked for a very long time.
This afternoon Bella did go home first because she continued to worry about Ozi.
“Alhamdulillah smoothly.” Devan takes off the backpack on his back and Bella takes over immediately.
“Mas have eaten?” Put a backpack on the sofa.
“Udah, earlier with temen-temen. Have you eaten?”
“Udah earlier with mamah sama Inka.”
“If you want to clean first, can use that bathroom, I already have the same towel mas clothes as well.” With the tip of her eyes Bella glanced at Devan's clothes that she had prepared on the sofa.
“Iya later I want to take a shower. What is Ozi's condition now? Has he slept for a long time?" Devan approached the sleeping Ozi. Look at his best friend and sister-in-law carefully. Some of the tools have apparently been removed from Ozi's body. Only the infusion is still attached to the back of his left hand.
"Udah getting better, was able to sit more upright, just still have to use the backrest. Eating too much." The light of Bella who followed stared fixedly at the face of the brother.
"Thank God he's improving. Oh yeah, where's mom?"
He did not see Saras' whereabouts.
"You've been to the halfway house in the same Inca. I asked mamah to rest there, Kasian so I can rest.”
“Yes, it's better to sleep in a halfway house than here.”
Devan is still watching his best friend who is asleep. His face was not as pale as before his sleep also looked sound. Thankfully, Ozi's condition improved over time.
“Yang, there's something we should talk about for a minute.” Lirih Devan suddenly. She looked at Bella who was beside her.
“About?” Bella was curious.
“We sit down first.” Devan invites Bella to move to sit on the sofa.
Sitting face to face and Devan looked at the wife's face with clinging.
“Em put it this way..So I've been close to the core crew and Eko sir, the conclusion is that we will finish the rest of the scene tomorrow. And I'd like your approval to turn some of the final scenes into the ones in the previous part. What do you think?”
Bella seemed stunned, thinking right through Devan's question.
“*Plot twist-*nya will not change just some scene that is too long, we will play in the middle part as a memory recall player.” Devan can read Bella's worries about the storyline and plot twist changing.
“Part where to move?” Bella asked back.
Devan takes the script from inside his bag and opens it in front of Bella.
“Part this we will make a memory recall in the part here.” Devan opens several pages in turn.
Bella takes over the script into her hands and rereads Devan's marked part. He was silent for quite a while, considering Devan's input.
“If this part is merge with the previous two parts, how do you think?” Bella followed the script.
Devan read for a while before deciding.
“Good. The ending could be denser. Good idea.” Devan said proudly. He rubbed Bella's head with love. He did not expect that Bella could quickly understand his point.
“Okey, if so I agree. Means tomorrow less is the scene taken?”
“Iyaa.. But the jatohnya so more effective ending.. Recall memory can make a deeper impression at the end of the story.” Tandas Devan's.
“Okey, I agree. We do it like that." Bella closes the script and turns to look at Devan.
"Now, the bath first let it not be too malem. I want to edit some parts first so that tomorrow does not confuse players. How?” bargain Bella.
“Okey. Just pack my laptop, your laptop is still in that car.”
“Sip sip, welcome to batheii..” Bella gives towel and shirt in Devan's hand.
“You're not coming?” Temptation Devan while winking his right eye flirtatiously.
“Eittt you yaa..” His eyes are round then glance at Ozi.
What if her brother hears, embarrassed too right?
“Hahahaha.. Yes yes. Muach!” Devan took the time to kiss Bella's head just before moving to the bathroom.
Bella just smiled at her husband.
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